Ok Bayne, sent you my revised SU. It was too long, so I had to send the other part in another PM.
Well it seems like this is gonna get good. Having a little trouble thinking of a character.
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I can't remember were I heard it but I just remembered it.
It's only funny until someone gets hurt...
Then it's hilarious!
I'll see if I can join. I'm busy right now, but I'll send you an SU later.
Wow great RP! Definitely in!
Character Name: Primrose Everdeen (goes by Prim)
Appearance: 5.6 Feet tall. long legs, a slight tan. Has long yellow and white hair resembling a primrose and wears a yellow-white primrose pin on her head. She has long side bangs covering her left eye and wheres her hair in a pony-tail. She has light brown eyes and is fairly weak but can outrun most people and can climb anything with ease. She's fairly average in body weight, just a bit thin. (sorry no picture, can't draw for my life x_x)
Personality: Very caring. Prim isn't a very confrontational girl and rather takes insults and blows then fighting, she's a push over. She rarely gets angry and is very intelligent for her age, but she unfortunately she acts from her emotions more than her brains.
Bio: Primrose has always been pushed around by everyone she met. She always tried to find the good in people and always cared for everyone, even the people who would psuh her around. Her mother (Delilah) became pregnant with her when she was 16 and took care of her as a single mom and dropped out of high school and was shunned by her family. Her mother named her Primrose because Prim would always bloom happiness in her heart. Prim and her mom was very poor, barely making the bills. Prim got a job as a fruit harvester ever since she was 10 (apparently no child labor laws). Prim was an excellent student and graduated early and was accepted into an IV league school. Prim's mother sent her to the school even though Prim demanded to stay and take care of her mom. After attending the IV league college for 5 months, she received a news about her mother being murdered by loan sharks for not being able to repay them back. Even with the money prim sent her each month her mom couldn't pay the bills and had to get loans. Hearing this news, Prim just became an empty shell... Her best friends Rosie and Alyssa couldn't bring her spirit back to life. Prim was later kicked out of college and was murdered by teenagers while on her way back to Alyssa's house (where she lived after getting kicked out from college). Not fighting back or calling for help, Prim died being beaten to death. After she died her regrets about leaving her mother to get murdered overwhelmed her and denied the invitation to go into heaven. As a reaper told her about this game, her spirits perked up again. This is my chance to redo my mistake, it my fault mother was murdered, prim told the reaper as she joined the games. She entered the games with one thing in mind, winning. For the first time she stopped caring for other peoples needs.
Her Medium: Her Primrose pin
Medium abilities: Her primrose pin has the power to shoot out yellow or white flower petals. She can control the petals by holding her Primrose pin. example: She moves her hands( holding the pin) to the left, flower petals rush to the left. She pushes her hand out in front of her, the flower petals are sent straight infront of her. If She just taps the pin while it's still in her hair flower petals scatter and makes it difficult to she her due to her skin and hair blending into the flower petals. The flower petals can't be made sharper or harder, it's just flower petals. She has can not control the petals when it rains, all it will do is drop to the ground. Petals are highly flamable >_<. When released petals will float around her, unless it's raining.
Her medium can also change her into any type of flowering plant, but only actual size of the plant, not some super giant one. Once in her "flower mode", she can make up to 50 duplicate flowers. The duplicates can realse highly dense pollen that easily gets into people's eyes and nose, making it hard to see and breathe. Once Prim breaks out of her "flower mode", her duplicate flowers will vanish slowly. The clones are flowers, and can only release pollen, and nothing more.
Is this ok? tell me if i missed anything :3
Last edited by gbj153; 05-27-2009 at 04:25 PM. Reason: medium edit again*
Platinum FC: 2149-4533-7671
I like it Gb. Heres mine.
Character Name: Filius Lux Lucis (Father Lucis for short)
Alliance: Player / Sage
Appearance: Filius stands at 6'3" by measured height, but due to his age, he hunches, and his eyline is at 6'0". He wears the long, flowing robe of a Priest. His face is aged with wisdom, his hair being bleach white. His facial hair, an englishmens wrap around goatee, is tied in two braids 16" from his face. His eyelines are sagged and ancient, with his pupils being colored a deep gree and purple mix. He has a golden cross pendant on his neck that shines as bright as the sun when he taps into its power.
Personality: Filius is a very spiritual man. Being one of the most devout Christians in the world, his beleifs are those of the Bible. He is often overly critical of those who question his beliefs. He is very overly critical, but he has a right to be so. His longevital life span has enabled him with vast quantities of knowledge few can even dream of. His confinement in his Cathedrals led him into solitude, which in turn made his cold heart grow even colder, shutting out all who cared for him. Because of being cut off from civilized society for so long, he has a very hard time understanding why people act the way they do, and kill the way they kill.
Bio: Filius Lux Lucis is a disciple of God, the one and only savior of the christian people. His bloodline traces back to the original Jesus Christ, whom died on the Cross for the world's sins. Filius has always felt he owed Jesus and God a huge debt for the salvation of the Christian people. He has dedicated his life to the study of the Bible, practicing the whole of it, leaving no commandmant nor law unscathed. He has followed every rule in the Bible feircely, and has forced it upon others who either doubt or threaten the Sanctity of the Holy Ghost.
He married at the age of thirty to a venerable christian woman, and together, they had two children, a boy and a girl. They were married fifteen long years, until an Atheist group broke into the Cathedral in which they lived and murdered his family. He was brutally beaten and flung into a river. But, being the eldest and most vitalized person in the family, he survived. He looked at it as an act of God, that it was he who gave him the power to survive, and that it would be God who would give him the strength to endure his tragic loss.
Some time later, roughly 9 years, he remarried to another woman, Christian as usual. They had three children in six years. In his heart, there was no way he would ever lose his family again. When his original family died, his heart had gone cold as ice, and the hearth of it hd become a dragon. The dragon symbolizing his dead family. When he remarried, his heart became warm again, and he let his love flow.
Yet somehow, he could always hear the Dragon speaking... talking to him.... whispering to him the sum of all his fears. It was your fault you know... the Dragon would beckon.... You caused your families loss, and you will be unable to hold onto this one. You cannot live forever, and neither can they. Remember, even stars burn out....
The dragons words sank into him like a venom, coursing throughout his being and filling him with a hidden rage. He came to understand, however, that the dragon was right. His family died in a car crash on the way to the grocery store. A few army-men had mistaken them for a Communist spy party, and opened fire on their vehicle. The flames billowing from the car were nothing compared to the flames of rage billowing around his heart. He wanted to destroy the Dragon, he wanted to crush the dragon, and yet he couldnt. In the end, he doesnt even want to. Because the Dragon accepts him, and tells him just the way things will work out.
He went into solitude, taking efuge in a huge Cathedral located in England. He witnessed the cold war, he saw the Korean conflict, and he was there when the World Trade Center collapsed. He has seen the Iraq war grow to a national conflict, and he no longer blames people for there mistakes. To him, everything that happens is under the will of God. If the Iraqi's are meant to be eradicated by the Americans, then that is how it must be. He does not argue. He has long grown out of attachments, leaving the Dragon that lived in his furnace heart alone to die. As he aged over the years, the dragons icy whisper would haunt him still. You will die too, Filius.... Even stars burn out...
Filius has lived for 128 long years, gathering knowledge. Every day, he regretted the way he had lived his life. He was not ashamed of the way it turned out, but he often wondered how his life would have been if he did not take the way of the Sage. The Dragon always whispered failure to him, and those ever familiar words of stars dying. He began to doubt his own reason for existence, and his role in life. He wondered if his strong religious beleifs had made any impact on the world. He wondered if, maybe, he helped himself too much and wallowed in the anguish of his memories too much to fullfill the legacy of Jesus.
Eventually, as the Dragon had whispered to him, he did die. He died alone, in his Cathedral, sitting on a pew in front of the Lord's cross. His heart gave out, and he passed away. At the moment of his death, before he ascended into the eternal land of immortal Angels in the sky, dark beings approached him. They called themselves "The Reapers," and spoke to him of a game... a game in which he could be given another chance at life. But this second chance would not encompass any memories of his previous life, and the way this intrigued him was incredible.
His thoughts raced, about all the things he could do. To be reborn, to be alive without the burden of being Jesus Christ's disciple, to live without the painful and haunting memories of his past....
To live without the Dragon....
He accepted the Reapers challenge. They transported him to their Dark city. As he surveyed his new surroundings in a place of evil, he realized their was one way for him to win. By using the power of God. The Reapers had said he needed to antie up the thing he cared most for in the world. It was easy for him to know what that was, but hard for him to say it. Eventually of course he did.
His entry fee was his Soul.
Medium abilities: Father Lucis's medium is the cross pendant he wears around his neck. When he grasps it, he can tap into his vast knowledge and enable telempathy. He can levitate a few objects, with bigger ones taking more power and therefore causing him greater strain. He can control atoms in the air to create a "Force" to some extent. He can influence these molecules to release energy, which would cause a forceful blast of energy.
Ok, there it is. Huge and complete. Thoughts?
Storm: I love it! I thought it was staged in medival Europe, then cars came out of no where xD
Bayne: how many winners are there per week?
Last edited by gbj153; 05-13-2009 at 06:21 PM.
Platinum FC: 2149-4533-7671
Name: Kain Valentein
Appearance: Kain is somewhat tall for his age and some would say he's a bit scrawny. He has dark brown hair that somwhat covers his eyes, just a little. His eyes use to be blue in the realm of the living but now have turned purple, from the mixing of his blue eyes and tears of blood upon passing away. His skin is slightly pale and around his eyes are starting to darken, hardly noticable though. He wears a black long-sleeved button-up shirt with the top 4 buttons undone and his collar standing. His pants are a very dark blue denim pair and his shoes are black tennis shoes.
Personality: Kain often keeps to himself and always has an emotionless, depressed look on his face. He usually doesn't speak loudly unless angered. He usually can be seen looking off into the distance thinking of something else. When angered he mostly stays calm stance-wise, but he begins to speak like most would when angry. He also avoids Reapers more-so than most, not that he fears them though, it must be another reason.
Bio: Kain entered the games for the ultimate prize of a second chance at life... but oddly enough the soul-records say his cause of death was... suicide. Why try to compete in the games to earn a second chance when you didn't even want the first? Well, Kain doesn't want to have a second chance, he wants to give a second chance. A second chance for his dearly beloved, recently passed Abigahle. He had to discuss a few things to arrange it so Abighale would recieve the new life instead of he, but he figured it was all worth it.
There is something greatly different about Kaine though. He entered the games immeadiately after leaving the world of the living, yet has the soul strength and control of a spirit that has been passed away for ages. This confuses all who know and definately stirs things up in the spirit world. He's made a lot of enemies because of this, especially in the Reapers. Out of all the contestants, Kain seems to get the worst treatment from them and the Noise. Nobody said it would be easy, espescially for a recently deceased.
Medium: Kains medium is a mystery. He has one, but everyones yet to see it. And his medium powers are almost as strange. He seems to increase speed and strenth for short periods of time, create an explosion of spirit energy around himself, and concentrate spirit energy to form a projectile. His medium is his most kept secret, and cannot afford to let anybody know what it may be.
Last edited by Bodine; 05-12-2009 at 09:22 PM.