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Thread: Super Smash Bros. Alternate Plot: The Rise of Nefirus

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    King Dedede created 10 waddle doos and 5 waddle dees on top of the ship. He then created 5 primids, reached out, and touched one creating a clone of himself. "Attack, my minons!" 5 waddle doos charged with spears drawn, while the 5 others threw their projectiles.

    ~The Island of the Ancients, the Temple of Time~

    The Black Knight walked forward with Master Hand, Link, Snake, and Ryu. They had arrived at the Temple where the Triforce was housed. Two stone golems stood in front of them, blocking the door. "It appears they will only let in the Hero of Time." “This will work just perfectly,” thought the Black Knight. “If only Master Hand would leave.”

    ~Destiny Island~

    Kairi went back to her normal clothes, breathing heavily and exhausted.

    "Looks like this is where I come in," Thought Ganondorf. Seeing as how Samus was falling through the sky and there was nothing that Marth could do to save her in time.

    Ganondorf closed his eyes and concentrated. This is the first time he tried to open a portal to such a far away place.

    -Meanwhile-

    As Samus was falling it became clear than no one could save her in time. They'd be dead in a few seconds. Just then, however, a Subspace portal appererd below them, still high up in the sky. They fell in it and it instantly closed. Than it reopend a few feet above the ground and they both gently fell out of it.

    Kairi, seeing that Samus didn’t need her help anymore, finished off the last of the heartless.
    A great blue piece of ice hit the 10 heartless and there were no more.
    Suddenly a dark clothed man with a bright orange beard appeared from a portal.

    Marth watched, astonished, as the Subspace portal dropped Samus to the ground.
    The only people who control Subspace are Nefirus and Tabuu, why would either of them help us?
    Marth jerkily landed the ship and ran over to Samus. "Wake up, Samus!" Marth shook her gently.

    Kairi went towards Samus."You OK?"

    "Of course I'm fine! No penguin is going to get away from the galaxy's greatest bounty hunter! I'll find him. And I'll kill him."

    Marth couldn't help but laugh. "He's gone now, he fell into the ocean as far as I know." Marth helped Samus up. "Come on, let's go see if Sora and Kairi have found the Keyhole."

    ~Subspace, the Smash Dome~

    Nefirus watched the events taking place through a portal in subspace. He didn't even need to think to realize what Tabuu was up to. He sent him a telepathic message.
    "HELLO, TABUU. IT IS NEFIRUS, THE TRUE MASTER OF SUBSPACE. DON'T THINK YOU CAN FOOL ME; I KNOW GANONDORF SAVED THOSE TWO. IT DOESN'T MAKE A DIFFERENCE ANYWAY, I'LL ABSORB YOU SOON ENOUGH. YOU'RE SUCH A COWARD; YOU DON'T EVEN SHOW YOURSELF IN FEAR OF ME."

    ~Destiny Island~

    Ratchet looked up. The whole scene seemed very hectic and ridiculous to him, but it was an attack. Whether the attack was planned out or not, though, was what Ratchet was wondering.

    He saw with am mix of horror and anger that his ship was taking off without his consent. He did notice, however, that Marth was not there, which gave him momentary relief, knowing that it was his ally piloting the ship, not an enemy.

    His relief changed to horror again when he realized that Marth, originating from a medieval world, had no idea how to pilot something with that type of technology.

    Master Hand was on it before Ratchet said anything. He hovered up to the ship, and made a motion to Marth telling him to lay off the controls. Using telekinesis, he took control of the ship, and fired several time bombs at the hoards of Priless and Heartless. They exploded, causing severe thinning out of the crowds.

    Back on the ground, Ratchet charged at the herd of his foes and blasted them with his Lancer gun.

    Meanwhile, Master Hand let go of control of the ship, hoping Marth could manage it himself, because he was too tired. Telekinesis took energy. Taking no time to pause, he sent a telepathic message to the ROBS. We need you! Master Hand called to the Ancient Minister. Warp about 20 squadrons of ROBs here as fast as possible! We need backup!

    In about half a minute, something like 100 ROBs materialized onto the battlefield.

    "Attack the Heartless, Priless, Waddle Dees, and Waddle Doos," Master Hand commanded.

    Obediently, the Robs went over and fought their enemies. Though they were stronger, but the ROBs were also severely outnumbered. And as such, they were losing. There were still countless Primids left, but only twenty or so ROBs. The fight seemed hopeless. They would have to run. But with Kairi still off sealing the Keyhole, they couldn’t leave just yet.

    "I know where the keyhole is!" shouted Kairi.
    She walked towards the waterfall and looked at the cave next to it.
    "It's in here."

    "Then seal it, for crying out loud!" Ratchet yelled to Kairi. "I'll hold off the enemies!" He parried blow after blow with his wrench, then fired a shot from the Bouncer, hoping to thin out the crowd even further. It took energy, to fire that gun, and Ratchet fell down by firing it. Tired, he got back up, but the grunts of the enemy forces had backed off. They knew the destructive power of the Bouncer.

    Marth watched, fearful, as the last ROB fell. The Primids were coming for the heroes now; it was a battle they couldn’t win. The prince was surrounded on all sides, but he kept fighting. No matter how many he defeated, however, more always came to replace them. It wasn’t too long before Marth suffered a few blows. Just as the crowd was swallowing him, the Primids were destroyed. Marth looked up, to see the Shadow Bug had been replaced by Link. The Hylian helped Marth up, and they fought on. The Black Knight, and the rest of the Relic group was there as well, and they managed to kill off the last of the Primids.

    “What are you guys doing here?” asked Marth.

    “Well,” said Link, “Master Hand felt that you guys were in danger, and he transported us here.”

    “There are no longer any groups,” the Black Knight said. “We’ll be cutting it close, but we should manage to gather the Relics and seal the Keyholes in time.”

    Kairi ran in the cave that had so many memories for her. She saw the keyhole above the picture of Sora and Kairi eating the papou fruit. Purple smoke was flowing through it. She aimed the keyblade at the keyhole. Blue light streamed across the distance between the top of the keyblade and the keyhole and a sound like a locking noise was heard. As the keyhole was sealed a green gas engulfed Kairi's face. She was choking.





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    END OF CHAPTER THREE
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    CHAPTER FOUR: DEATH OF CREATION-- Sneak Preview!

    With Kairi hostage, The heroes are forced to make a deal with Nefirus to get her back! But his demands will rob the team of it's most important member-- Master Hand! Time ticks away as the heroes speed towards the first Relic. Next stop-- The Triforce!
    .............................................

    Sora looked at King DeDeDe sorrowfully. "I'm sorry Master Hand, I can't kill him, and I know he's evil, but...."

    "Fine, I’ll do it!" Snake forced king DeDeDe to his knees and shot him square in the head.
    "Rest in peace!”
    Snake then pulled out the swords gave them to their rightful owners, picked up Rya and boarded the ship.

    "Master Hand, you said you wanted me to go to the gummi ship?" Sora asked, looking at the bright yellow and orange colors of the ship

    Sora entered the Gummi Ship along with Master Hand.
    "Where do you want me to go?"

    Nefirus looked at Master Hand through the portal. "YOU KNOW WHAT I WANT... I NEED YOUR ENERGY TO BECOME COMPLETE."
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    OOC: I added some cool dialogue to the fight between Marth and Ridley. I think it makes it a lot more dramatic, go check it out!

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    NOTE: This is not dead!
    Just letting everyone know that Chapter 4 IS COMING!!! I've been swamped with AP work, hopefully over February Break I'll get both Chaps. 4 and 5 cranked out. Sorry once again, and hoping you look forward to the next chapter!

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    I know, I know. I'm getting chapter 4 started tonight (fingers crossed).
    Hold on just a little longer, guys!

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    OOC: This took far, FAR too long. THis isn't even a big chunk of chapter, but it's something. Sorry, guys. Just know that I won't give up. THis thing will get finished even if I have to write up the whole thing from scratch.

    Anyway...

    GAME LOADING...

    Chapter Four: Death of Creation




    ~Destiny Island~

    "Help!" Kairi screamed. Sora woke up. He heard her. He rushed towards the waterfall and entered the cave. He heard screams of pain. He saw Kairi crouched on the floor and he suddenly heard the same high-pitched noise he heard before. "Leave me alone!!" Sora held her hand and tried to heal her.

    "I need help!"

    "Kairi stay calm, you'll be okay!"

    "No!" She was gradually becoming intangible. Kairi looked upto Sora. "Sora, save me… okay?" She kissed him gently on the lips. He held her light red hair and stroked it, and in mere moments, she vanished. Sora was crying and crouched down on the ground.

    Sora shouted at the top of his voice: "NO!" He looked at the keyhole at great disgust "There… there was something wrong with that keyhole…" Streams of tears were falling upon his cheeks. He sat by the drawing of Kairi and Sora sharing a papou fruit together. His shirt was getting wet because of the crying. He reached his hand out towards Kairi's drawing of Sora. "Why does everyone…have to die?”

    He couldn't get himself together and his life was falling apart. His two best friends were dead…
    "There still might be hope" He walked outside the cave and saw hordes of heartless coming from the sea and filling Destiny Islands with darkness. He saw Ratchet still by the entrance of the cave but with Marth standing next to him.

    "I.... Kairi… she's gone."

    King Dedede fell through the air towards the water. He quickly begian sucking in air to make himself lighter. As he reached the water Dedede was almost at a stop. He splashed in and swam to the shore, opening a portal to talk to Nefirus. "I have failed you, master. I grabbed Samus and tried to bring you her arm cannon, but I was followed and outnumbered. They are all together at Destiny Island. We must strike now!" With that, King Dedede created a warp star out of subspace and flew towards the cave.

    Snake charged at group of primids, he drew his ak 47 and blasted two in the head. One primid lunged at snake with a light sword, but snake dodged and whacked it across the face with the butt of his gun. Snake took out a knife in one hand and his pistol in the other. A group of heartless came charging at him.ha kingdom heart panzes He shot one in the face and stabbed another in the shoulder, Snake spun and pistol wipped a heartless, and kicked another out of the way. "There's too many," snake yelled. Just then Rya ran in and cut two enemies in half. Rya sliced the legs off of another, and rammed a sword through a primids throat, sending black shadow bugs all over the place. A group of 20 waddle dees enclosed the two fighters, "lock the keyhole," Rya screamed

    Nefirus turned to Bowser. “WHAT IS IT, BOWSER?”
    “I killed Mario, like you asked. May I be second-in-command, now?”

    "VERY WELL, YOU MAY BE MY SECOND-IN-COMMAND. GO AND FIND GANONDORF, ONCE HE IS DEFEATED, TABUU WILL BE FORCED OUT INTO THE OPEN. THERE'S NO HURRY THOUGH... I FINALLY GAINED ENOUGH POWER FROM KING DEDEDE TO ASCEND TO A MORE POWERFUL FORM ONCE AGAIN."

    Nefirus closed his eyes and was suddenly consumed by waves of darkness that shrouded him like a cocoon. When the darkness cleared, Nefirus had gained far more ornate armor and large wings similar to Tabuu's old Off Wings. His eyes now glowed a more powerful shade of red and he had a long trail of darkness sprouting from his head that looked a bit like a ponytail.

    "DO NOT FAIL ME, BOWSER."

    -Meanwhile-

    Marth was walking toward the waterfall where the keyhole was with Samus when he heard Sora's shouts. He ran through the waterfall and found Sora crying. Kairi was nowhere to be found.
    "Sora, what's wrong? Why are you crying?"

    "She's...She's..."
    Sora couldn't say that awful word. He said it too much recently.
    Sora's face was red because of the crying.
    Marth didn't need for Sora to finish the sentence. He understood what had happened. He put his hand on Sora's shoulder. "Sora... I'm so, so sorry..."

    Sora suddenly saw King Dedede on the shore and leapt to his feet. His face was still red and strained, but now he looked furious.
    "ARRGH!!! COME ON!!!"
    Sora charged into the army of Primids and Heartless. Marth nodded. He understood that Sora needed a way to let his feelings out, even if he didn't admit it to himself. He turned and cut his way through rows and rows of Heartless and Primids. Though Marth cut down many, more just seemed to take their place. He didn't know how long he could last like this.
    "You okay Marth, you don't look too good!"
    Sora changed into his Valor Form and ran twice as fast.
    The heartless that were in the way of King Dedede fell by the keyblade.
    -Meanwhile-

    "LET ME GO!" Kairi shouted towards Nefirus. She was trying to free herself but it was no use, the Subspace energy on the chains made it impossible to escape.
    Kairi looked at the pedestal that showed what was happening in Destiny Islands. "Oh Sora!" she thought. "Why do you want me anyway, Nefirus?"
    Nefirus laughed. "FOOLISH GIRL. DID YOU NOT THINK I HAD MADE PRECAUTIONS IN CASE SOMEONE TRIED TO SEAL THE FIVE KEYHOLES? I HOPE YOU ENJOYED YOUR KISS WITH SORA, BECAUSE THAT WILL BE THE LAST YOU EVER SEE OF HIM. HE'S PROBABLY DEAD RIGHT NOW, ALONG WITH ALL THE OTHERS. THEY CAN'T HANDLE ALL THE HEARTLESS AND PRIMIDS I SENT TO KILL THEM."
    "They'll find a way Nefirus, good always does, and Nefirus you and your goons will fall and lose this battle!”
    "PERHAPS SO, BUT THAT IS JUST THE REASON I BROUGHT YOU HERE, LITTLE GIRL. YOU FOOLISH HEROES ALL HAVE SOMETHING IN COMMON: THE WILLINGNESS TO SACRIFICE YOURSELVES SO YOU CAN SAVE SOMEONE. YOU REMIND ME OF LEMMINGS, SO EAGER TO JUMP TO YOUR DOOM."
    Nefiruses' laughter echoed throughout Subspace.
    Kairi gasped. "No I will refuse, I'll sacrafice myself if I need to." She stared at Nefirus' evil red eyes and a shiver went down her spine.

    ~Destiny Islands~

    Rya said to Snake: "Go get Dedede, I’ll take care of these guys!" Snake used opened a gap in the the waddle dees with his remaining ak ammo and ran through, it closed quicky and rya was surounded. Rya pulled out double samuri swords and turned into black smoke and flew through his enimies at a very fast pace. He slashed and hacked the waddle dees to bits until only one was left, it stabed with its spear and hit rya square in the chest, however it went right threw the smoke. Rya choped the waddle's head off in one blow and fell to the ground exasted, in the middle of a circle of bodies.

    King Dedede called on 200 waddle dees to block the path of sora and his friends. Snake charged at dedede and fired two rockets at his large body. Dedede took control of the rockets with Subspace matter, and redirected them back at snake twice as fast. Snake shot one down with his colt and jammed anothers signal causing one to blow in the air. I need help he thought.

    Sora saw Snake in peril."Reflect!" The missle reflected off Snake and went back towards Dedede. "There, now the favour has been returned!" he shouted out to Snake.

    Sora refused to be stopped by the inferior Waddle Dees. He threw his halo handled keyblade that said "FOR MY FRIENDS!" on it and threw it towards the Waddle Dees. To Sora's disbelief, they all fell and left King Dedede open for an attack.

    Dedede pulled out both of his hammers and slamed one on the ground sending a wall of subspace at Sora. “Lets see him reflect that!” King Ddede then charged at Snake and swung both hammers at him one high, one low. Snake ducked the first but was hit by the second hammer sending him to the ground. "Throw me your sword!” he yelled at Rya.

    Sora was not in the mood to be beaten easily. He threw the kingdom key at the Subspace wall making it cut in two.

    Marth leapt towards King DeDeDe and slashed at his mallet. To his surprise, it simply re-formed. It must be made of Subspace energy! thought Marth. He leapt behind DeDeDe to attack him from the rear.

    -MEANWHILE-

    Nefiruses' eyes glinted. "LIKE I SAID, GIRL, YOU ARE LIKE LEMMINGS. YOUR FIRST REACTION IS TO SACRIFICE YOURSELF SO THE OTHERS LIVE." Nefirus grabbed Kairi's hair and roughly forced her to look up at his face. "I'M SURE SORA WILL DO ANYTHING TO MAKE SURE YOU'RE ALRIGHT. AND SO WILL MASTER HAND. THEY WOULD BOTH SACRIFICE THEMSELVES TO SAVE YOU. THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I'M COUNTING ON!"

    "I WILL TELL THEM THAT I'M NOT IMPORTANT!, I AM NOT AFRAID!" Kairi shouted

    ~Destiny Islands~

    Ratchet ran over to help his friends. There's so many of them! He though with dismay. He took out his Gravity Bomb, and launches it 8 times in different directions. Powerful force-fields resulted. However, he was dissatisfied, so he took out his Zodiac.

    This might finish them all, Ratchet thought grimly. The Zodiac was the most powerful weapon in his arsenal. A click of the trigger, and the whole area becomes engulfed in a white light of extreme, incinerating energy. He had only used the Zodiac once before, and it had left him unconscious for hours, and when hew woke, he was sore all over. While it would never effect any team mates of the user of this powerful gun, pressing the trigger is a serious energy drainer.

    Slowly, he pressed the trigger.

    BOOM.

    An explosion that sounded extremely powerful and dark rang throughout the Destiny Islands, but Ratchet was out cold on the ground, Zodiac next to him.

    Link ran over. He had talked to Ratchet before about the Zodiac, and if it were used by the wrong hands, Nefirus for example, it could prove deadly. Nefirus might not even feel the drain of energy. Carefully, Link slid the gun into Ratchet's bottomless pocket.
    Link sighed. The battle was not yet over. He took out his sword and walked over to King Dedede. "Take THIS!" He yelled, and he thrust the Master Sword into Dedede's head. Link, too, was exhausted, and he dropped to the ground, panting.

    Master Hand telepathically called to the Ancient Minister again. We need a lot more ROBs! Send in 200 of them!

    Moments later, a large number of ROBs teleported in. "What do we yes master?" One of them asked.

    "Just fight the Waddle Dees, Waddle Doos, Heartless, and Primids," Master Hand sighed. "I just don't have any more energy to fight with," he muttered to himself. He turned to Sora. "Wheres... Kairi?" He asked.

    Rya used his remaining strength to toss snake his sword, snake ran at ddd with an uzi in one hand, a sword in the other, and a rocket lancher across his back. King dedede threw a hammer at snake, but snake ducked under it, sliding on his knees he cut king dedede's inner leg as he pasted under the kings legs. He then turned to his back and a burst from his uzi into the large penguins back. ddd stumbled, but quickly black shadow bug material rushed out of his hammer and covered the wounds stoping the bleeding.
    He ran and slashed the keyblade at the heartless that were blocking his way.
    5 ROBS were circling around Sora protecting him.

    Dedede felt the cold sting of links sword as it entered his head, shadow bug quickly moved to the wound, but his mallet was getting smaller and smaller, he felt weak. gotta get out of here Snake lept to his feet and climbed up ddd's back he dug the sword deep into the kings shoulder blade. King dedede turn and yelled in pain. He swung his hammer at marth, and shot a beams of subspace at his other foes. He knocked snake off his back and slamed the hammer hard into snakes back.

    Sora dodged the blast and slashed the keyblade at King Dedede.


    "No!" Dedede yelled! The Keyblade shattered DeDeDe's leg with a resounding crash. He fell to the ground, clearing the area and sending dust into everyone's face.

    Nefirus suddenly appeared, holding a struggling Kairi.
    "KAIRI IS WITH ME! NOW DO AS I SAY, OR BID HER FAREWELL!"

    "NO!!! NO ONE DIES TODAY BUT YOU!" Marth shouted as he dashed towards Nefirus. He didn't even get close before he was blasted away by an invisible Subspace force.
    "No more killings will happen!" Sora shouted. He jumped up towards Nefirus and grabbed Kairi by the hand.

    ~Destiny Islnads~

    King Dedede's blood trailed out as he flew. He used the last subspace energy he had left to heal the wound. Snake pulled out the rocket launcher and fired at the king. The rocket easily tracked down the exhausted king and blew him out of the sky. He fell to the ground and began to crawl away into the forest. How many hits can this penguin take? Snake followed his trail and walked up to Dedede. His body was tattered and torn. He had two swords stuck in him. rya's samuri sword, and the master sword of link. his back was covered with bullet holes, and his leg completely shatered. the black subspace had seald the wounds but it left large black scars. He was still bleeding internally. Snake radioed to master hand "Should I finish him?"

    Kairi screamed "No Sora, run!" Nefirus watched Sora attempting to escape with Kairi.

    "HOW FUTILE."
    Nefirus extended his hand towards the two. It stretched and grew like rubber until it was big enough to grab a person. Nefirus grasped a struggling Kairi and brought her back to him.
    "IF YOU WANT TO SEE KAIRI ALIVE, YOU WILL HAVE TO FOLLOW MY PLAN WHEN THE TIME IS RIGHT. UNTIL THEN, FAREWELL." Nefirus disappeared through the Subspace portal with Kairi.



    OOC: I know this needs some serious editing work, which will be up shortly. Sorry this has been so sparse lately.
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    This project is going to be on hold for a bit longer. I know it's been a huge break since the last update, but I'm making it official. Don't worry It'll be up in a week or two. Senior year has just been very busy for me (two essays due at the end of the week-- BIG ONES).

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    Is anyone still out there reading this? I'm not posting this for myself, you know. I'm posting the next part of the chapter now. If anyone wants more, TELL ME. I'm not working on this for an empty audience.

    GAME LOADING...


    "No, Kairi... "Nobody else will die! Nobody! You hear me Nefirus!?"
    Sora was in pain emotionally and physically, the scars and the bruises from the heartless and Xehenort were burning. He turned towards the others.

    "We have to protect each other in any means possible, we can't lose another soul, Kairi if you can hear me, I will save you" said Sora.

    Kairi watched as Sora limped down the steps. "Nefirus, you will pay for this!"

    Master Hand responded to Snake's message telepathically: Yes, definitely. There’s no reason to keep him alive. And, please try to take the swords out of his body and return them to their rightful owners. Those are powerful.

    Snake tied king Ddede's hands behind his back and threw him in the back of a hummer. As Snake approched the battlefield he noticed the ground was littered with robot parts, pieces of Waddles, Heartless, and Primids. Ratchet and link and rya were unconsions and aang was dead. But the battle was won. "I’ve got a prisioner," shouted Snake offering King Dedede. "where to now," he asked.

    "Hey, Sora you want him," seeing that sora had lost alot today.

    Marth got up and walked over to Sora. "Sora...be strong. We know Kairi isn't dead, and for the time being, it looks like Nefirus wants to keep it that way. The best way to help Kairi and everyone else is to gather the relics and seal the keyholes.”

    How many more will have to die? Sora? Kairi? Link? Ratchet? Master Hand? Even me? But one person made Marth more worried than even the thought of himself dying.
    Samus?

    “Kill him," Master Hand said simply. "There's no need for him to be alive. The battle is over. Let's get on Ratchet's ship." Master Hand grabbed Ratchet and Rya, then dragged them onto the ship. “Sora,” he called. “Get in the Gummi Ship. I have some unfinished business with Nefirus," he said. Heart beating, with a sick feeling in his palm (stomach), he approached Nefirus. "What- who- do you want in exchange for Kairi?" He asked, knowing that Kairi was essential for the sealing of the Keyholes, and that the mission couldn't be completed without her.

    "Thank you Marth, I really appreciate it," Sora said. Sora looked at King Dedede sorrowfully. "I'm sorry Master Hand, I can't kill him, and I know he's evil but...."

    "Fine I’ll do it" said snake he forced king dedede to his knees and shot him square in the head, "Rest in peace!” Snake then pulled out the swords gave them to their rightful owners, picked up rya and boarded the ship.

    "Master Hand, you said you wanted me to go to the gummi ship?" Sora asked, looking at the bright yellow and orange colours of the ship

    Sora entered the gummi ship along with Master Hand.
    "Where do you want me to go?"

    Nefirus looked at Master Hand through the portal. "YOU KNOW WHAT I WANT... I NEED YOUR ENERGY TO BECOME COMPLETE."

    -MEANWHILE-
    Marth stayed behind as the others boarded the ship and turned to Samus. "Samus, I-I haven't really talked to you since what happened on your ship. There are a lot of things I want to say to you, but I didn't feel ready to talk about them, I was too cowardly. But what happened on this island has been a true eye opener to me. Kairi is gone. Sora never even got a chance to say goodbye to her. I now fully understand that Nefirus is true, pure evil and won't hesitate to kill any of us. I wanted... I wanted to make sure I got this off my chest, because I don't know if either of us will even be alive a week from now. I couldn't bear it if you died and I hadn't said anything, never knowing what you would have said or done in response. So..."

    Marth took a deep breath. "Samus, I love you."


    So he does love me, thought Samus. She leaned forward to kiss Marth. But something was wrong. She wass kissing her visor, and so was Marth! She had forgotten to take her helmet off! "I'm the galaxy's greatest bounty hunter...But apparently not the best at socializing." Samus was so embarassed, she didn't know what to say. She was speechless. Marth laughed and turned slightly red. "You forgot this," he said as he lifted her visor off and kissed her. Time stood still.

    After what seemed like an eternity, they broke apart, both still looking rather dazed. Samus was the first to speak.
    "We should...get going now." It wasn't very romantic, but it was true. Nefirus could be right on their tail, for all they knew. "We should go back to the temple," she called to whoever was listening. Samus was still thinking about her kiss with Marth. She didn't know what to say to him. So she headed for Ratchet's ship without looking back.

    Rya woke up on Ratchet’s ship. "Did we... win," he asked to snake

    "Yes," Snake answered.

    "And..... Dedede?" Rya asked between breaths.

    “Dead,” Snake responded. "I think.... I will get some rest," said Rya.

    “Good idea," responded Snake before walking off.

    "Suddenly, a large ship appeared on Ratchet’s ship's radar. "Bowser," Snake cringed. "Sora, where is the second keyhole," he yelled. We need to take off now."

    "Go to the Bridge of Eldin, we'll meet you there!" Sora shouted.
    Without knowing where to go, the Gummi Ship rose above Destiny Islands
    The Island was surrounded with dead Heartless and Primids. They resembled his friends on The Island in his head.

    Nobody on the Island was probably alive but he shook off those thoughts and put his attention on the ship. He saw Ratchet's ship fly away into the distance and Sora suddenly had a pain in his stomach because Master Hand and Sora were on their own.

    "Master Hand, tell me where to go!"

    Marth turned and followed Samus onto the ship. She loves me... Marth thought dreamily. He had never felt this happy before. Snap out of it, Marth! He thought to himself. Marth tried to focus on what was happening around him, he needed to stay alert. "Where are we going now?" he asked Snake.

    "So you want me?" Master Hand asked, but he was just stalling for time. He noticed a coconut next to him. Having an idea, he sent a telepathic message to Link. Link, I want you, Sora and Marth to lead the fight against Subspace. I am sacrificing myself to save Kairi, as she has one of the Keyblades, and we can't go on without her. He paused for a moment, to let the information sink in. Now, Link, after I die, please get rid of all of the coconuts beneath the tree. One of them has my powers secreted in it, and it must not be found by the likes of Nefirus.

    Then, with intense focus, he transported his powers of telepathy, mind reading, and telekineses into the coconut. It was impossible to detect.

    "I am ready, Nefirus. Release Kairi, and I shall give myself up."

    He added one more message for Link: Please bring our forces to the Forest next. It is necessary that we recover at least one of the relics before doing anything else.

    The Black Knight looked at Link. He appeared to be focused. "Is something wrong?" The Black Knight sounded more like he was trying to get information than he cared about Link himself.

    ~High above the Smash World~

    Snake gazed at the landscape as they flew over, everthing looked darker. The sky turned black. From these clouds a thick, heavy rain begian to fall. The black drops made a load ping on the metal extieror of the ship. He remembered one year ago when all seemed lost against Tabuu, and the world was covered by darkness. Now they had two enimies to face, and not all of the fighters from 365 days ago returned. Many were dead.

    Then he saw it. A large black beast flew in front of the ship. At first he thought he saw Ridley, but no, the animal was thiner, and far darker then Samus' nemisis. This creature had the apperence of a dragon, but was made of black magic. But the most horrorfying thing was what sat on its back. It was a man sized figure. With long crimson hair, he wore crimson red robes over black armour, carried a wine red sword called zarroc. Snake looked deep into his eyes, they were pure evil. Looking at the pale, boney face of the shade sent a chill down snake's back. Then it vanished, the beast dove out of sight and left Snake wondering if what he saw was real.

    OOC: Terrible grammatical mistakes. All will be fixed if I hear people clamoring for more.
    If not, farewell. I will stay on this forum as a ghost, watching, only interacting sparsely, until people return. If you read this, I may be still around. Knowing me, I'll be back. Hopefully sooner than later.
    A wise man once said "It's just a big bag of pointlessness."
    Remember that videogames aren't everything. But they can sometimes seem like quite a lot.
    I guess what I'm trying to say is, enjoy your games like I do: with vigor, but not obsession. This is probably going to sound incredibly pretentious. Not my intention.
    See you guys around!
    -GigaRidley

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