Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

[Shadow*91]

With that out of the way, now onto my feedback of this signature. The truth is, unless you start using tutorials and or pick up new skills you wont be improving anytime soon. It is important that you take advantage of tutorials as they can help you improve your skills. Also, as said before, there isn't much of a focus with your signatures. If you're going to use more than one render you need to have a main focus point. Specifically, one of the renders. Lastly, your background doesn't match the signature and or tie in with the renders used. It also looks a bit choppy. I seriously suggest you take the advice of the other artists and begin focusing on tutorials.

first off nobody seems to notice that i said i'm still working on it.

@bold text: i'm trying to make the guy on the right the focus.

@underlined text: you've never seen Gundam 00 have you? if not then here's all you need to know

Spoiler Alert!

the guy is Lockon Stratos and the robot is his Gundam Dynames. in Gundam 00 the gundams give off these special green particles. also there are a lot of space fights.

with that little knowledge you can probably get what i'm going for here.

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[AndThen?]

All that considered, it's still looking kinda crappy, so I suggest you stop posting in here seeking advice until you can actually take some and use tutorials like everyone has said about a bajillion times.

[iRAWR]

@bold text: i'm trying to make the guy on the right the focus.

If so. Then I sugggest taking out the gundam in the middle.

@underlined text: you've never seen Gundam 00 have you? if not then here's all you need to know

Spoiler Alert!

the guy is Lockon Stratos and the robot is his Gundam Dynames. in Gundam 00 the gundams give off these special green particles. also there are a lot of space fights.

with that little knowledge you can probably get what i'm going for here.

I see what your doing. Read some tuts so you can execute it better.

[Syntax]

first off nobody seems to notice that i said i'm still working on it.

@bold text: i'm trying to make the guy on the right the focus.

@underlined text: you've never seen Gundam 00 have you? if not then here's all you need to know

Spoiler Alert!

the guy is Lockon Stratos and the robot is his Gundam Dynames. in Gundam 00 the gundams give off these special green particles. also there are a lot of space fights.

with that little knowledge you can probably get what i'm going for here.

While I understand that you may still be learning, there has to be more effort put into your signatures. From the looks of it, there doesn't seem to be much work done on the background. When you're making a background, you want it to blend in with the render('s) you choose to use. If they don't match it brings down the overall effect of the signature.

[Bodine]

C&C on my current?

[Syntax]

I would try making the size of the signature a bit smaller as theres a bit of negative space to the left of Bruce Lee. Also, try adding a round white brush stroke where your render is to add a bit more light and set the layer to either lighten or soft light and change the opacity. Adding a bit of light there should also reflect the light on his arms and face.

[Destiny]

Nevermind.

Uhh, good work, guys.

[blueovalboy7]

Some C&C please.

A simple piece I was contemplating entering over my iNature piece for the SOTW.


Something I just finished.

[LeWaffles]

Nature? Me confused.....

pfff yeah it says "spring"...
ok its a stretchish...
I errr ???
I shoulda voted for freestyle!
Hold on I have another version, maybe that will be more nature ish.

[Bliss]

Some C&C please.

A simple piece I was contemplating entering over my iNature piece for the SOTW.

This is pretty much open for anything. The concept is good so far. Maybe go the ipod route but put your own lil twist on it.

Something I just finished.

look like the classic Ender tutorial with ur own lil twist..lol...looks good, i always liked this style. nice job