first...what ever happened to him being an animagus?
second....the locket being around his chest, infused with part of a dark lord's soul, changing it's grip at will, and affecting his energy, and spirits...uh....sorry, been done before... it's called LOTR
third...again, lotr. A siege doesn't quite mesh with the rest of the harry potter series....it's too...big....
fourth...ron and hermione's kid's names suck
fifth, books getting quite vulgar in comparison. Read book one, and then 7 right after. it's hilarious. This is the first time she's ever used the adjective "effing"
sixth: the cloak..... in book one, ron instantly recognizes as "whoa, that's an invisibility cloak", then now, it's supposed to be a legendary item, one of a kind? sorry rowling, you suck. lol
seventh: fiendfyre? just a LITTLE bit coincidential? oh yeah, the biggest retarded wizard just randomly learned a dark, uncontrollable curse, that, wait a second, just so happens to be able to destroy horcruxes!
eighth: harry should have died..... too many people knew he was a horcrux.....absolutely no *gasp* at all...
side-note: britishisms are hilarious, my list of funny words and phrases from across the pond.
1. Snog...seriously...you guys use this?
4. the use of the word "impregnated", I know I, as a 16 year old, use this world quite a lot
will edit with more later....