like the topic say's i need people to proofread my articles for school because i'm a part of the school paper. i appreciate anyone who helps me out as far as proofreading, suggestions, feedback, and helping out with extra information.
first up is a preview of Beyonetta.
this is what i have so far.
please note that the format is for a newspaper so the paragraphs are meant to be that small.
El Rodeo staff writer
By Ryan Rojas
For those who fell in love with Dante from Devil May Cry bite your fist because there is a new demonic slayer in town, and this time she’s a beaut. Many of us were disappointed to see Devil May Cry end but now Hideki Kamiya (creator of Devil May Cry) is nearly ready to release his next game Beyonetta.
Beyonetta is a witch that slays demons who disguise themselves as angels (just can’t get away from those demons can ya Mr. Kamiya?). Beyonetta uses magic that we mortals can’t even try to understand.
Not only does Beyonetta have her own gun’s but she also uses magic which lets her use her hair as a weapon, oh and did I forget to mention that the only thing covering this foxy lady is her hair?
Her body is covered with just her hair which appears to look like a black suit. Every time she attacks or is injured a piece of her skin is revealed (for shame who ever abuses that!).
Besides from Beyonetta, this game looks pretty promising as far as graphics and game play go. The lighting matches up perfect with the theme. The voice acting is terrific as well as her personality.
There isn’t much information out yet so we don’t have a release date but this game is certainly worth following, especially if you liked Devil May Cry. Lets just hope that Hideki Kamiya doesn’t make us wait too long before we get to see some more of Beyonetta in action.