LMFAO.Originally Posted by Daveman
Sorry if I didn't make it clear that that wasn't how you talk, I was just comparing the 2 sentences.
Let me find a real comparison.
Two examples from your MK review before it hit 1 minute:
"Stuff" isn't needed here, you could give a description of things you could buy however ("Where you buy weapons, armor, blah blah blah...). Definitely makes it sound better.Originally Posted by Daveman
Obviously this sentence could be updated with better grammar...Originally Posted by Daveman
Maybe they're small, but these are two things that, if corrected, could affect the way you talk all-around. Remember, these are two things within the 1st minute of 1 of your videos...