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    Quote Originally Posted by ssbb_lover
    Well that's you, it makes you comfortable when he uses common people language. I think he should as well, but not say "And when you go in this cave, there's like 100 guys ready to kill you and junk...aww shit, see I just died because..." and the sentence goes on, but this is how I would try to phrase the same sentence: "Now when you enter this cave, there's going to be a ton of guys looking to kill you...aww shit, see, I died because..."

    You see, some of the words are the exact same, but unnecessary words are taken out and better adjectives are inserted for other, "lamer" ones.
    Dearly noted, however i dont remember me saying "And when you go in this cave, there's like 100 guys ready to kill you and junk...aww shit, see I just died because..."
    which review was that? Oo
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    Quote Originally Posted by Daveman
    Dearly noted, however i dont remember me saying "And when you go in this cave, there's like 100 guys ready to kill you and junk...aww shit, see I just died because..."
    which review was that? Oo
    LMFAO.

    Sorry if I didn't make it clear that that wasn't how you talk, I was just comparing the 2 sentences.

    Let me find a real comparison.

    *EDIT*

    Two examples from your MK review before it hit 1 minute:
    Quote Originally Posted by Daveman
    Get coins where you buy...stuff
    "Stuff" isn't needed here, you could give a description of things you could buy however ("Where you buy weapons, armor, blah blah blah...). Definitely makes it sound better.
    Quote Originally Posted by Daveman
    Battles where you like fight a whole bunch of guys
    Obviously this sentence could be updated with better grammar...

    Maybe they're small, but these are two things that, if corrected, could affect the way you talk all-around. Remember, these are two things within the 1st minute of 1 of your videos...
    Last edited by ssbb_lover; 07-01-2007 at 05:56 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ssbb_lover
    LMFAO.

    Sorry if I didn't make it clear that that wasn't how you talk, I was just comparing the 2 sentences.

    Let me find a real comparison.

    *EDIT*

    Two examples from your MK review before it hit 1 minute:

    "Stuff" isn't needed here, you could give a description of things you could buy however ("Where you buy weapons, armor, blah blah blah...). Definitely makes it sound better.

    Obviously this sentence could be updated with better grammar...

    Maybe they're small, but these are two things that, if corrected, could affect the way you talk all-around. Remember, these are two things within the 1st minute of 1 of your videos...

    your just too educated for your age :/

    you need to go play football with 19 year olds and get some dumb knocked into you

    j/k but still i kinda like it :o

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deranged.vE
    your just too educated for your age :/
    Sorry? :PPPP

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    Quote Originally Posted by ssbb_lover
    LMFAO.

    Sorry if I didn't make it clear that that wasn't how you talk, I was just comparing the 2 sentences.

    Let me find a real comparison.

    *EDIT*

    Two examples from your MK review before it hit 1 minute:

    "Stuff" isn't needed here, you could give a description of things you could buy however ("Where you buy weapons, armor, blah blah blah...). Definitely makes it sound better.

    Obviously this sentence could be updated with better grammar...

    Maybe they're small, but these are two things that, if corrected, could affect the way you talk all-around. Remember, these are two things within the 1st minute of 1 of your videos...
    I see what your talking about but i do my best to do something different from other reviews. If you want professional review, most people would hit up GT or IGN. My reviews are kind of like a more casual look at games
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    Quote Originally Posted by ssbb_lover
    Sorry? :PPPP

    I play about 15 hours of tennis a week...
    yeah but play football some contact sport so your brain gets rattled some

    Quote Originally Posted by Daveman
    I see what your talking about but i do my best to do something different from other reviews. If you want professional review, most people would hit up GT or IGN. My reviews are kind of like a more casual look at games

    and thats why i enjoy your reviews :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daveman
    My reviews are kind of like a more casual look at games
    You could have said that.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Daveman
    I think my next review will be a DS castlevania game
    castlevania cool, I like Dawn of Sorrow a hell of a lot better then Portrait of Ruin, thats just my opinion, keep it up Dave, I'm sure to stay in touch with your reviews

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    definitely helpful, cant say that i like the design of the joytech gun, the brando gun looks pretty decent though. i may get the brando gun, when more shooters are released.

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    ya great reviews dave really impressive

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