Super Smash Bros Alternate Plot

Blue Man · 05-16-2008, 01:39 AM

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I hope you didn't think I was angry, but I'm afraid Samus has some unfinished business on her ship.

Ic: "I'm perfectly...fine, Sora. I don't need...a doctor. I just need... to find... Ridley's body...Have to make sure...he's dead." But it was pretty clear to everyone watching her that she wasn't going anywhere. "Kill...Nefirus for me...would you?" Samus wasn't talking to any one in particular. In fact, she was mostly just mumbling to herself. She was becoming dilusional again. Samus crashed onto the floor and fell asleep.

Ooc: GigaRidley, you said something about Metroid Prime three? That would be Omega Ridley, correct?

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 01:39 AM

The ship was about to take off
"Pit, Pit say something!"
Sora checked the heart beat. There was nothing. "He's ...........dead!" he exclaimed.
Sora was angry.
He banged his fist on his seat repeatedly. Streams of tears ran through his eyes.
"Nobody can die!
We gotta go after Dante"

WMBQ · 05-16-2008, 01:39 AM

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Originally Posted by sorabrawl

can you change the character limit to 5

Nope! =D

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Originally Posted by GigaRidley

Marth breathed a sigh of relief. Samus was alright!
"I think... I think I killed Ridley, but I broke my leg in the process. We're being attacked by more of Nefiruses' forces, but the others are holding them off."
Marth touched Samuses' arm.
"are you feeling any better? can you move?"

Samus' ship is going down in flames. Are you on Ratchet's ship now, or did you not read the last few posts?

Blue Man · 05-16-2008, 01:40 AM

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Originally Posted by sorabrawl

The ship flew off into the air.
"Pit, Pit say something!"
Sora checked the heart beat. There was nothing. "He's ...........dead!" he exclaimed.
Sora was angry.
He banged his fist on his seat repeatedly. Streams of tears ran through his eyes.
"Nobody can die!"
We gotta go after Dante

I'm sorry. I am a little confused. Who's dead now?

WMBQ: sorry, double post, again. I'll edit my post, again. (Blue Man sighs)

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 01:43 AM

Pit is dead because of that Devil Trigger attack

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 01:46 AM

Sora got himself together
"We'll defeat Nefiros and all the others in name of Pit, but first we have to see Yen Sid or someone else"

Blue Man · 05-16-2008, 01:46 AM

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Pit is dead because of that Devil Trigger attack

No! Not Pit! (Blue Man cries)

Ic: Things were going along pretty smoothly compared to the last ship they were on. But that would soon change.

The metroids gathered before their leader, Metroid Prime. Dark Samus looked up to see Space Pirate ships flying up above her. Phazon. she thought. It was the only thing she ever thought about. It was her life source. It was her power. Dark Samus transformed herself into pure energy with her last bit of power, and became invisible to all creature's eyes. She was headed for the Space Pirates.

Ooc: Let me explain. Dark Samus is one and the same as Metroid Prime. The Space Pirates (Ridley is the leader of the Space Pirates) are in possession of Phazon. It gives Dark Samus energy. I thought the Space pirates would be controlled by the writer's the same way the Primids are. Any one can control them.

WMBQ · 05-16-2008, 01:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Blue Man

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I'm sorry. I am a little confused. Who's dead now?

WMBQ: sorry, double post, again. I'll edit my post, again. (Blue Man sighs)

Ooc:
sorabrawl, that was really well written... I actually feel a little bit of pain in my throat as if I need to cry... I'll miss Pit...

Ic:
Ratchet turned on the radio transmitter. "Samus... that's your name, right? You'll never survive on that ship. You can take over the controls on my ship if you need to, but that ship won't work anymore. It's burning, it could explode any second, and there are two evil masterminds on board. I'm giving you one more chance to get on my ship. If you don't... it was nice knowing you, even if I never saw you."

Clank turned around and saw Sora leaning over one of his friend's bodies, which he assumed to be asleep. From Clank's view, it looked like Sora was crying. "What happened, Sora?" The little robot asked.

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 01:53 AM

Sora sighed "Pit died from Dante's attack"
The tears from Sora surged through his cheeks
"Nobody else will die, Samus we've protected ever since I saw you, now return the favour and come back now"

GigaRidley · 05-16-2008, 01:54 AM

Marth turned his head.
"Pit... no..."
His eyes began to well up with tears, but he pushed them back and looked away from the body. He suddenley realized what was happening with Samus.
"Samus!"
Marth struggled up off the floor. His leg was burning horribly, but he didn't care. Samus had to get off the ship! He limped towards the exit.
"I'm getting Samus out of there!"

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 01:55 AM

Suddenly Xemnas woke up. He saw Samus and was ready to finish her off once and for all.

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 01:56 AM

Sora suddenly saw Xemnas raising his blades toward Samus.
"I'll help!"
He jumped towards the ship and blocked the attack.

GigaRidley · 05-16-2008, 01:58 AM

OOC: Sorabrawl I edited my post. Marth is going to get Samus out of there NO MATTER WHAT, even if his leg becomes permanently damaged.

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 02:01 AM

Xemnas was annoyed with Sora. He swung the blades with tremendous force. And Sora backed away.
His cut on his forearm was burning.

WMBQ · 05-16-2008, 02:02 AM

"Marth, I'm bringing my ship near Samus' burning ship, but you're limping. I'm going in with you." Ratchet steered his ship near Samus' burning ship, and opened the top hatch. He helped Marth get out of it, then jumped onto the other ship. He snuxk up behind Xemnas and struck him hard in the head with his wrench. That outta knock him out, Ratchet thought.

He turned his attention to Marth. "Hurry! Go find Samus and bring her to my ship! There's no hope for this ship! It will blow up in 10 minutes at the very most!"

sorabrawl · 05-16-2008, 02:04 AM

ooc
sora's fighting Xemnas
and you sneak through