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05-16-2008, 10:58 PM
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05-16-2008, 11:01 PM
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Master Xehenort got in the way
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Does he HAVE to? I know that sounds immature, but this current scene is supposed to be peaceful. The meadow Ratchet landed in is a designated haven for the good. Master Hand used his powers to make it that way; Only those who Master Hand chooses to come in may. It took a lot of power, he can only do it to one place. It's sort of like Subspace, but for good. Also, anyone who Master Hand has chosen to enter may allow others to come in.
Same to you, mcl. Can Bowser NOT be there?
Also, could the both of you make your posts a little bit longer? They lack so much, and I reserve the right to kick you both out of the thread if your work is not satisfactory.
Speaking of kicking people out of the thread,
I'm kicking out alexbel and bw!. Neither of them post very much at all. This means the positions of Ike, Yoshi, and Jigglypuff are now officially up for grabs.
Also, mcl, I own Master hand. I've made that clear several times now.
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"Yes, I know Pit very well! We were friends and allies a year ago! Do you know him?"
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I know this post was short, but the point of this was for the Ooc, not the Ic.
Also, I'm adding that if I see ten more posts by one member that are unsatisfactory, I'm kicking them out.
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i put a paper on my door that says "do not disturb while plot is in session"
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05-16-2008, 11:05 PM
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And so it begins!
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"Um....he was fighting with us....but um a guy called Dante killed him while we were fighting"
Sora began to cry again. Streams of tears flowed through his usually jolly cheeks. But Pit told me something while you were fighting with Dark Samus"
He began to explain about the 5 keyholes of Subspace
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05-16-2008, 11:08 PM
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well that short post was basically to ask a question and what about Nefirus I thought I was supposed to follow orders.You know Bowser was here first then you all of a sudden came to the island
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05-16-2008, 11:21 PM
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He began to explain about the 5 keyholes of Subspace
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I'm counting this as unsatisfactory. A real writer would re-explain it, not just say that their character said what they did. He or she would use quotations.
Please understand, we really have to kick out posting up a notch! This is a writing thread!
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"Oh... wow, he died... I- I'm really sorry Pit... That really sucks..." Link looked down at the ground. "Do you have his body?" He asked. "We should really hold a funeral for such a brave warrior."
It was getting dark. Master Hand, not having heard the conversation between Link and Sora, announced that they should set up camp for the night. That meadow was one of the only really safe places the heroes could stay without the fear, risk, and threat of enemy attacks. "Does anybody have any camping equipment?" He asked, realizing that he didn't have anything with him.
"Lucky for you, I do," answered Ratchet. He opened up the back of his ship and took out about ten sleeping bags. "Always be prepared," he chuckled. He laid them down throughout the meadow. Darkness was approaching quickly, and Ratchet realized that he was one sleeping bag short. "Um..." He started.
"It is fine. I do not need a sleeping bag," Master Hand said, as if reading Ratchet's thoughts.
Ratchet shrugged, and sat down for a moment to clear his thoughts.
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05-16-2008, 11:32 PM
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Sora thought "I'll tell them tommorow morning about the 5 keyholes"
Sora saw the team together in a big circle with the campfire the size of sora's keyblade.
He lyed on his navy blue sleeping bag, looking at the night sky.
Thoughts were running through Sora's head.
"Is the universe going to be safe, what are they going to do with Riku and Kairi?, how is Pit doing?"
Suddenly Sora saw a shooting star in the dark night sky. It shone as bright as the moon. "I wish Pit was alive again"
Sora closed his eyes and went into a deep sleep.
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what happens next?
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05-16-2008, 11:52 PM
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Marth stirred from his unconcious state and found himself looking up at the stars. He recognized where he was; the Isle of the Ancients. The last thing Marth remebered was throwing himself in the way of Dark Samuses' missiles.
Wait, Master Hand is here... I need to tell him what I heard whil I was in the SmashDome!
He sat up, and winced. His back and leg were still tender from his previous battles. He saw Master Hand floating across from him behind a campfire.
"Master Hand... It's good to see you again. I have important news I've been anxious to tell you. News about Nefirus..."
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05-16-2008, 11:58 PM
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Sora suddenly woke up. He looked at Master Hand and Marth talking to each other.
and he saw Neros sufeering.
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05-17-2008, 12:03 AM
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Nero had followed the group without a word, and was now sitting on his sleeping bag, wincing and trying to stifle his shouts of pain as he attempted to remove Dante's bullet from his own leg.
Blood ran down from the wound, and he was holding his left fist partially in his mouth, biting it in the darkness.
With his right, he dug at the bullet desperately, scraping and pulling, but the bullet refused to come free.
He needed treatment. The energy Dante laced his bullets with was like a poison. He needed to get the bullet out, then his body could get rid of the poison.
But with the bullet still in his leg, Dante's poisonous shot from Ebony could very well kill him.
[OOC] Wishing upon a shooting star doesn't really work, Sorabrawl... :/[/OOC]
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05-17-2008, 12:04 AM
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I made the Alternate Plot
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Master Hand turned to Marth. "News, Marth? On Nefirus? Please, tell me. We must know about our enemy if we expect to defeat him. Did you see him? How was the ride back and where is Samus's ship?"
This caught Ratchet's attention. He blushed and backed away nervously, deciding to let Marth tell Master Hand the fate of Samus's ship.
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05-17-2008, 12:05 AM
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"Master Hand, we need to heal Neros, he's dying, I can feel it" Sora exclaimed
He pointed towards Neros, streams of blood were flowing to the lime green grass.
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05-17-2008, 12:10 AM
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Master Hand turned away from Marth. "Tell me what happened later. I believe Nero needs my help." He hovered over toward the bag Nero was sitting in. He muttered something impossible to pronounce by a human tongue, hoping it would get the poison out of Nero's body. It was an antidote spell, but Master Hand couldn't do anything about the bullet stuck in his leg. That would have to be taken out by force. Satisfied, Master Hand turned back to Marth.
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Keep in mind, hack, that Pit is an angel. He can be revived by divine forces, sch as Paletuna in this case.
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05-17-2008, 12:14 AM
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"I... I think I killed Ridley. As for Samuses' ship... it was destroyed. I don't exactly know how, I wasn't able to participate in the events at that point."
Marth turned his head towards the stars and thought for a moment.
"About Nefirus... yes, I saw him... I spent a week trapped in his hideout. While I was there, I heard him say something shocking to Bowser over his communications screen."
Marth turned back towards Master Hand and paused.
"You'll think this is crazy, but trust me... this is real. Nefirus IS Tabuu. ...Well, not exactly. You were not awake to remember this, but during our final fight with Tabuu during the events of last year, his Off waves from his wings turned us all into trophies. To stop this from happening again, Sonic blasted his wings off, weakening him. Those shards of Tabuu eventually formed into Nefirus."
Marth paused once again.
"He wants to absorb you and Tabuu to become complete once again and become even more powerful than he was as the original Tabuu. I didn't hear much of this, but a being known as "HyperTabuu" was mentioned. This could very well be his true form. We must prevent him from accomplishing this!"
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05-17-2008, 12:16 AM
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[OOC] So, when a character dies, they'll just be returned by Paletuna?
That just completely sapped the drama of the last few scenes away.
And as previously stated, the energy comes from the bullet. Eliminating the poison that's within Nero will only lead to the bullet pumping out more.. [/OOC]
Nero released his fist from his mouth, for a moment, he thought the poison was done.
The pain stopped, thanks to Master Hand.
But only seconds later, the bullet began emanating more of the energy.
Screaming out, Nero punched the ground, leaving a fair indentation, and a dirty hand.
Nero closed his eyes and winced, holding his breath and just sort of hoping it would go away..
Opening his eyes slowly, Nero faced his sword, which was on the ground to the right of him. It was one-sided, as known by most people at this point, and had about a three inch spike coming off of the sharp end at the very tip.
As gruesome as the thought was, Nero decided he'd need to pull the bullet out with just that.
Grabbing the sword awkwardly, he spun it around, and slowly pushed the spike around the wall of the bullet-hole, towards the bullet.
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05-17-2008, 12:22 AM
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It's really only Pit that can be revived by Paletuna, and even then, it's really only a one-time thing. He's an angel, which is technically a form of undead, which can't really die. If Pit dies aain, however, that's it for him.
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Master Hand stopped moving, shocked. "So there are two Tabuus, but they're enemies? Frankly, I think it should stay that way. It seems there is a ransom on me now... I must evade being destroyed, or even Nefirus at all." With that, he averted his attention to Nero. "My spell didn't work, did it?" he asked. :I suspected something like that from the likes of Dante... I'm afraid I can't help you while the bullet is still in your skin. I might be able to clot the wound, but not eliminate it. Do your best to take the bullet out with your sword." Master Hand watched Nero cut himself, not at all pleased with what he was seeing.
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