Super Smash Bros Alternate Plot

sorabrawl · 05-18-2008, 04:29 AM

Kairi felt his pulse, no heartbeat.
Kairi cried on Riku's shoulder
Sora wanted to stay strong, he didn't want to make the situation worse. But Sora couldn't stop his temper.
He banged his fist onto the grass
"WHO KILLED HIM?!" he shouted.
Kairi didn't answer. She was too upset to say anything.
"Was he a keyblader?" Sora asked.
Kairi nodded.
"Xehenort!!!!"

GigaRidley · 05-18-2008, 04:55 AM

Marth saw what was going on with Kairi and Sora and ran over, but stopped. He didn't want to intrude. He turned to Master Hand, but he still wasn't sure which team he wanted to join, Relic or Keyblade.
"Can I think about this for a bit?"
-MEANWHILE-
Nefirus saw the heroes, but as he tried to enter the clearing, he was blocked by an invisible wall.

"THIS IS MASTER HANDS' DOING... I WILL DESTROY YOU ALL!"
Nefirus began to bang against the force field. To the heroes' horror, It began to crack over. Nefirus was just too powerful! They had to leave before he broke through.
Marth saw Nefirus smashing the force field and turned to the others.
"IT'S NEFIRUS!!! WE NEED TO LEAVE NOW!"

sorabrawl · 05-18-2008, 05:40 AM

Sora turned away from Riku and looked at Marth
"Marth, I want you to come with the keyhole group, I need your help and advice, you're a great friend to me"
Sora looked back at Riku and he began to cry.
"Kairi could you come here for a sceond"
She walked towards Sora's sleeping bag.
"Kairi....uh......Riku was a great friend and....he would want us to stop being upset about him. We've got each other and....I'm just glad you're here with me....now....Riku would want us to keep positive"
Kairi hugged Sora. She wanted to kiss him but his face was covered in dry blood
"Thanks Sora, we must be positive and....."
Sora suddenly saw the burning trees.
"Kairi it's Nefiros, run now!!" Sora exclaimed.
"No I'll pick you up"
She picked Sora up carefully but swiftly by the arm. She dragged him along the floor and placed Sora next to the ship.
Kairi saw Riku lying on the rotten grey grass.
She ran to Riku's body.
"Kairi, don't, stay away from Nefiros!"

Sora wished he could face Nefiros and get revenge for Riku but he couldn't, he was too injured

sorabrawl · 05-18-2008, 06:18 AM

Xehenort suddenly appeared in front of Kairi.
"NO!, Kairi"
Sora didn't care about the pain that was running through his body.
He ran towards Xehenort and slashed him.
"Keep off of her"
A gold light glowed from the cut that was made from the Priless. He was angry.
"You will not hurt Kairi"
Sora turned into a shining gold suit and his eyes turned gold (this is not Master Form)
Five keyblades flew around Sora's head and the keyblades slammed down onto Xehenort. Xehenort fell onto the ground and groaned. Another slam of the five keyblades went down onto Xehenort and he suddenly stopped groaning.
"This is for Riku!" Sora shouted.
Five shots of Blizzard hit Xehenort. And Xehenort turned into ice.
The keyblades once again slammed onto Xehenort and the ice turned into 5 pieces of ice like an ice sculpture being crushed onto the ground.
The shining gold suit turned back into Sora's original clothes and the 4 extra keyblades vanished into blue light.
Kairi had a look on her face that looked astonished but proud.
But her face became a blur and the smile on her face turned into a scared expression.
Sora fell to the ground because of the amount of pain on his body and the amount of power he unleashed onto the unexpecting Xehenort.
"Sora!" Kairi screamed.
She checked his pulse, it was normal.
Kairi had a sigh of relief
"Come on, get in the ship!" she shouted

ooc
I am trying to stop double posting
I am really annoyed at myself
Please forgive me WMBQ

WMBQ · 05-18-2008, 12:06 PM

Ooc:
It's fine, sorabrawl; I understand that they're just mistakes. Try to be careful, though.
Also, GigaRidley: The meadow where all the "good" characters are is a haven, and only those who Master Hand chooses to enter may.
sorabrawl: Epic Final Smash.
I made it clear a few posts ago that the meadow they set up camp in is a haven... hold on.

Quote:

Originally Posted by WMBQ

The meadow Ratchet landed in is a designated haven for the good. Master Hand used his powers to make it that way; Only those who Master Hand chooses to come in may. It took a lot of power, he can only do it to one place. It's sort of like Subspace, but for good. Also, anyone who Master Hand has chosen to enter may allow others to come in.

There we go. It's on page 20.

GigaRidley · 05-18-2008, 01:43 PM

OOC:, Sorry, WMBQ. I'll edit my post.

WMBQ · 05-18-2008, 03:33 PM

Ic:
Master Hand turned to Kairi, while observing Nefirus's attempts to get in through the force field he had created. "If Nefirus is out there," he began, "then there is little hope he is alive right now," he finished sadly. Then he turned to Ratchet. "Do you have anything that can get us out of here quickly?" He asked.

Ratchet nodded. "I'll go get it," he said. He walked over to his ship and took out a chunk of machinery.

Clank was unpleasantly surprised. "Oh no!" He exclaimed. "Not the Gravimetric Warp Drive?" He asked.

Ratchet kept installing it in the ship.

"The untested Gravimetric Warp Drive?"

Ratchet merely nodded his head.

"The one you built from Blargian metal?"

"You coming?" Ratchet asked.

Clank shook his head, looking futile. "We are doomed," he said grimly.

Ratchet turned to Master Hand. "Tell everyone to get in my ship. I'll get us far away," he said through gritted teeth.

Master Hand turned to everyone else. "Though Nefirus cannot get through the barrier I have set up, it would be unwise to remain here. We all must get in Ratchet's ship so we can escape to a safer place," he announced.

Ooc:
Recognize the conversation between Ratchet and Clank, anyone?

lbu8 · 05-18-2008, 04:13 PM

[quote=WMBQ]Ic:
Master Hand turned to Kairi, while observing Nefirus's attempts to get in through the force field he had created. "If Nefirus is out there," he began, "then there is little hope he is alive right now," he finished sadly. Then he turned to Ratchet. "Do you have anything that can get us out of here quickly?" He asked.

Ratchet nodded. "I'll go get it," he said. He walked over to his ship and took out a chunk of machinery.

Clank was unpleasantly surprised. "Oh no!" He exclaimed. "Not the Gravimetric Warp Drive?" He asked.

Ratchet kept installing it in the ship.

"The untested Gravimetric Warp Drive?"

Ratchet merely nodded his head.

"The one you built from Blargian metal?"

"You coming?" Ratchet asked.

Clank shook his head, looking futile. "We are doomed," he said grimly.

Ratchet turned to Master Hand. "Tell everyone to get in my ship. I'll get us far away," he said through gritted teeth.

Rya Hayabusa(he is a ninja, google him)watched it all happen from a near-by tree.looks like they're about to leave As clank distracted ratchet he jumped down, rolled behind the ship and climbed aboard, carefull not to alert anyone. Rya found a nice hiding spot behind some cargo and waited for someone to come along.

Snake saw the ninja sneaking around, from his blackhawk(helicopter). Hayabusa moved so fast he was simply a black blur, Snake barley saw him.

Snake spent most of the morning cleaning his weapons alone, just how he liked it, as if no one knew he was there. He observed soras friend draging a dead body, and the group grieving over there loss. ha, he shouldn't get so attached Master Hand was right i didn't like that kid, he never even said thanks for me saving his butt

oh well time to go introduce myself. Snake walked over to ratchets ship and moved into the same opening Rya had used. He slowly crept down the corridor,

then Rya jumped out from behind a box, dagger drawn. Snake side steped the assalent(cant spell) and gave him a chop in the back. Rya stumbled but turn just in time to avoid a kick from the foxhound agent. Rya lunged with his dagger but snake grabed his arm and threw Rya on the ground. Snake drew his knife and pressed it on Rya's neck drawing blood, "Who are you" he wispered. I am Rya Hayabusa I have looked far and wide for a fighter who could match my skills, finally I have found him. "Ha, I am far better then you", Snake snickered. Rya rolled over locking Snake in an armbar, "you are far too overconfident, I have stocked(bad choice of words) this group of yours since the attack begian, and believe you need my help. I am on your side", Rya said. "Well then get off of me" snake yelled as he kicked Rya in the face. The two combatents tumbled out of the ship and shoke hands.

Once out side Snake and Rya approched ratchet and asked "Whats the plan?"

Meanwhile King Dedede approched nefirus "need any help" he slamed his large hammer against the forcefield opening a small gap. DDD called for 50 waddle dees commanded by 5 waddle doos "attack them"

"Yes sir" the doos and dees leaped through the hole spears at the ready

"Pretty impressive right" the dream land king said to nefirus

ooc: Sorry for the super long post had to introduce two characters.

sorabrawl · 05-18-2008, 04:57 PM

By the way Ibu8 he did say Thankyou
"Thanks, I need help...."
Sora's vision was starting to fade away.
He saw a faded version of Xehenort and the man that was saving him.
"Thanky..."
Sora shut his eyes and found it hard to breath.
There was a wound on his heart, it was an ice blue cut
__________________
IC
Kairi once again dragged along Sora across the rotten grass.
She placed him in a seat of the ship.
"Snake, I just want to say thanks for rescuing me and I owe you a favour, thankyou for saving my life. The reason why I haven't thanked you before is because of the shock of Riku's death. I am really sorry"
Sora held out his bruised and scared hand towards Snake.

Kairi ran towards Riku's body.

lbu8 · 05-18-2008, 05:16 PM

ooc: i know i was just trying to show some of snakes personality, what do u mean by the seat of the seat?

Ic: "Sure kid no problem, I am sorry for your loss, but their are casulities in all wars." I have decided to go with you to find the keyholes you need me. This is Rya," snake said pointing to the figure croached beside him, "he will come too."

"oh no king Dedede has breached the wall," shouted Rya. "Sora you must yourself together, he is dead we must get out of here"

Rya ran at the kings hentchmen, while snake got in the blackhawk, "get in sora, time to go." Rya reached the army first, he sliced a waddle dee in half and hit another with a ninja star. Rya pulled out his bow and shot two more before impaling a waddle dee on his sword. one waddle doo shot a bolt of lightning at him, but Rya rolled dodged it and threw a dagger in the eye of his attacker. Then Snake arrived in the attack helicopter, he fired 4 hellfire missiles at the attackers before opening up with his machine guns, tearing into the waddles. The waddle doos ordered a retreat and rya cut down any remaining hentchmen. The force field was almost down, Rya jumped aboard the helicopter and shouted to ratchet, "whatwere your planing to do your out of time."

sorabrawl · 05-18-2008, 05:26 PM

"We've all gotta go, go to Destiny Islands, the keyhole team needs the gummi ship it's back there!"
Kairi was fighting alongside Snake and Ryu.
(Kairi learnt a new spell after Kingdom Hearts 2) She used water on a Waddle Dee and then she frozen it to an icicle
Kairi heard Sora shout from the ship
"Come on let's go!"
It was time to escape.
She looked at the corpse of Riku.
"Goodbye, Riku" she murmured and then she casted Fire on Riku's body making a sendoff to him.
She turned her back against Riku and ran towards the ship. A tiny tear fell onto the dead grass.

ooc
Sora sat in a seat in the ship. Sorry about that.
Has WMBQ accepted Ryu?

lbu8 · 05-18-2008, 05:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sorabrawl

ooc
Sora sat in a seat in the ship. Sorry about that.
Has WMBQ accepted Ryu?

ooc thats cool, yeah i sent him a private measage about Rya, i wanted people to think he was bad.
who else is on the keyhole team:
rya
snake
sora
kairi

lbu8 · 05-18-2008, 05:39 PM

ooc: sorry for double post i can't edit
r these the teams
relics:........... Keyholes:
master hand... sora
link............... kairi
................... snake
................... rya
................... ratchet
where are we now and why is the gummi ship on the island

are you guys just making these places up(destiny islands, island of the ancients) or are they acually in brawl like the(smash dome, bomb factory), no big deal just i was getting confused with were we are.

sorabrawl · 05-18-2008, 06:12 PM

Nobody heard Sora and Kairi. They were still fighting
"Let's go, we need to leave, Nefirus is about to break the barrier, Ratchet, get the ship ready!" Kairi shouted

WMBQ · 05-18-2008, 06:34 PM

Ooc:
New characters through private messages:
Rya (lbu8)
Aang (sorabrawl)
Confirmation of dead characters:
Xemnas (Sora's Final Smash finished him)

Also, the force field Master Hand made is impenetrable. Completely. There's no way to break it, even by force.

Ic:
"Grab Samus, Nero, and Marth! We're not leaving them behind!" Ratchet called. He hopped in the ship, with Clank following reluctantly. He had his doubts about the Gravimetric Warp Drive.

"Ready?" Ratchet asked to no one in particular once everyone was inside the ship. "3... 2.. 1... GO!!" The ship's fire flared bright green, and it flew away so fast it was gone in a fraction of a second. Ratchet turned the Gravimetric Warp Drive off. "Where are we now?"

"I believe we are above the forest," Clank said, his eyes wide open so he could scan the area. "That's about three hundred miles away from the Isle of the Ancients, and, as Master Hand stated before, is the location of the Triforce."

Link perked up. "We're here?" He asked.

"Yes, I do believe we are," Clank answered.

Master Hand went in the back of the ship. He found a vagabond. "Is your name Rya?" He asked, sensing who this new character was. He was sitting next to Snake, and they weren't arguing, which gave Master Hand the right to infer that Rya was a benevolent addition to the team.