Super Smash Bros Alternate Plot

Azndude · 05-13-2008, 02:50 AM

How about Metaknight?

Character: Metaknight
Alliances: Good
Gender: Male
Appearance: Mostly a head with a mask, a golden serrated mach sword, and a cape that can also change into bat wings to enable flight.
Personality: Mostly serves for himself, however he can have good intentions. Metaknight will get involved with others if the need seems necessary but if no need appears then he simply flies off to train or help others. He is very competitive and is proud of his (new) Battle Ship Halberd.

sorabrawl · 05-13-2008, 02:52 AM

i would like a character to fight beside Ridley so it will be a 2v2

mcl · 05-13-2008, 02:52 AM

Name: Bowser
Gender:Male
Alliance: Evil
Appearance: A king koopa with spikes on his shell that breathes fire. Very large and fierce, feared by many.

Personality: A mean temper with no heart. He will do any thing to rule. He hates Mario for many reasons and has a twisted plan that has a real twist. He even uses his own comrades.
PS:Ill be controlling Mario and Bowser and join forces with Nifirus

sorabrawl · 05-13-2008, 02:54 AM

is bowser going to join the fight?

sorabrawl · 05-13-2008, 02:58 AM

let's see what you've got azndude

Azndude · 05-13-2008, 03:02 AM

IC:
As Metaknight soars across the ground he casts his gaze towards the woods after hearing a strange booming voice. He sees a brilliantly evil aura emanating from the trees and just as quickly casts his gaze away... "I don't know WHAT is in there but I don't want to have anything to do with it..." Metaknight then glides off across the field and comes across a rather peculiar sight.

He sees an angel like character and a strange looking boy confronted by a rather large pterasaur.

He mutters to himself "This looks like it could be interesting." And with that he folded his wings and proceeded in watching the fight...

Azndude · 05-13-2008, 03:08 AM

OOC:
Well, ugh, i have to get off the computer...
my mom needs it so thats probably all ill be doing for tonight, ill be excited for whats goin down tomorrow!

sorabrawl · 05-13-2008, 03:12 AM

after 30 seconds of watching the match, metaknight hears a sound towards the lake beside him (that is about a km wide). He hears the sound of a cannon. A gold flash suddenly shone from underwater.
A pirate ship in a toon appearance appeared from the depths of the lake.

sorabrawl · 05-13-2008, 03:15 AM

Name: Toon Link
Gender:Male
Alliance: Good
Appearance:

Personality: Toon Link is a swordsman who saved the Great Sea from Ganondorf after the flooding of Hyrule. His appearance, attacks, and personality are a mirror of the incarnation of Link. Toon Link's name refers to the "toon-shading" animation technique used in both of the video games that he starred in: The Legend of Zelda: The Wind Waker and The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hourglass.

IC:
Toon Link jumps out of the pirate ship and lands next to Metaknight. He looks at Metaknight and turns his head at the fight on the rooftops of Hyrule Castle. The gummi ship fires cannons at Ridley. This causes a distraction for Ridley while Sora and Pit take rest. They are very tired. Blood is coming out from the scratch from Sora's cheek. It is painful. Pit gives him reassurance.

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disturbed · 05-13-2008, 04:32 AM

Warning

Spoiler Alert!

Hey sorabrawl and azndude if you guys read the first post in this thread you would know you have to wait for wmbq to accept you. Thats the only thing I have to say to you Azndude so you don't have to read the rest of this. Your doing pretty good. As for you Sorabrawl, prepare for a

Spoiler Alert!

You seem to be doing a lot of bunnying.

Quote:

Originally Posted by WMBQ

-No bunnying. This means you can't take control of other people's characters, and you can't say what happens to them. (Be it in a battle or not)
Example #1:
Fox asked Meta Knight if they should set up camp for the night and he agreed.
Example #2:
Bowser fired the Trophy Cannon at Meta Knight and it hit him in the face and he (Meta Knight) turned into a trophy.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sorabrawl

after 30 seconds of watching the match, metaknight hears a sound towards the lake beside him (that is about a km wide). He hears the sound of a cannon. A gold flash suddenly shone from underwater.

You already broke one rule as metaknight is azndude's character.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sorabrawl

Suddenly Ridley saw something in the sky it was an orange and yellow space ship that looked like it was made out of blocks. Blue lazers suddenly started shooting at Ridley. Ridley dodged them. A brown spiky haired boy jumped out of the ship with a blade shaped like a key jumped towards Ridley.

"And who are you?" asked Ridley with annoyance in his voice.
" I'm Sora" he replied.
The two of them were brawling in the air. The both of them landed on a castle called Hyrule Castle.

What do you think

Character: Sora
Alliances: Good
Gender: Male
Appearance: back
front
Personality: As a teenager he has his share of concerns but overall he manges to keep an upbeat attitude. He seems a bit simple minded at some times but he has a strong sense of justice.

Theirs a couple things wrong with this quote. Can you guess what they are. Well for one... you bunnied ridley. Another thing is you (As it has already been stated SEVERAL TIMES) you need to write somthing about his appearence. You cant just give images. And as I have already stated you started posting before wmbq said ok.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sorabrawl

ok how about pit
Character: Pit
Alliances: Good
Gender: Male
Appearance: Pit is loosely based on Icarus and Eros (also known as Cupid), figures from Greek mythology. The clothes that he wears and the fact that he is an angel resembles Perseus, Bellerophon, and Hercules, the last also being an archer. His character design has changed very little over the years, having always included elements associated with classical antiquity (such as the chiton and sandals). His primary weapon is the bow and arrow. In Of Myths and Monsters, Pit first received a crown of laurel, as well as revealing his eye color, blue. In Super Smash Bros. Brawl, Pit is seen garmented in an exomis. On the official Super Smash Bros. Brawl website, it is said that Pit is an angel that cannot normally fly.

Personality: Could you let me off with this one. He hasn't actually had a game that includes a story about himself

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sorabrawl

Name: Toon Link
Gender:Male
Alliance: Good
Appearance:

Personality: Toon Link is a swordsman who saved the Great Sea from Ganondorf after the flooding of Hyrule. His appearance, attacks, and personality are a mirror of the incarnation of Link. Toon Link's name refers to the "toon-shading" animation technique used in both of the video games that he starred in: The Legend of Zelda: The Wind Waker and The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hourglass.

IC:
Toon Link jumps out of the pirate ship and lands next to Metaknight. He looks at Metaknight and turns his head at the fight on the rooftops of Hyrule Castle. The gummi ship fires cannons at Ridley. This causes a distraction for Ridley while Sora and Pit take rest. They are very tired. Blood is coming out from the scratch from Sora's cheek. It is painful. Pit gives him reassurance.

You decided to use 3 characters in one day? And you brought them in just to help sora in one fight against Ridley? I'm sorry but thats just ruining the plot. I'm really tired now so I'm gonna end this here. Otherwise (if I wasn't tired) I'd type about another 20 minutes woth of reading for you.

Blue Man · 05-13-2008, 10:36 AM

Ooc: I'm sorry SoraBrawl, but as disturbed said, you have to get the ok from WMBQ first.

Ic:
The Black Knight saw a new being in front of him. "Are you my new master? Perhaps we should leave before we are distrtacted by another battle. Though if you want me to take care of Master Hand, I will."
Edit:
Ooc:

Quote:

Originally Posted by sorabrawl

IC:
Toon Link jumps out of the pirate ship and lands next to Metaknight. He looks at Metaknight and turns his head at the fight on the rooftops of Hyrule Castle. The gummi ship fires cannons at Ridley. This causes a distraction for Ridley while Sora and Pit take rest. They are very tired. Blood is coming out from the scratch from Sora's cheek. It is painful. Pit gives him reassurance.

GigaRidley, please just ignore this. SoraBrawl, until you have been accepted, you can't add to the story. You are not a bad writer, but you are breaking pretty much all the rules.

GigaRidley · 05-13-2008, 10:53 AM

Ooc: Um... Blue Man, NEFIRUS came to help you, not Ridley.
You need to edit your post.

Blue Man · 05-13-2008, 10:58 AM

ooc: sorry. i'll get right on it.

Edit: It has been edited.

Edit: I have to go. Be back tonight.

Azndude · 05-13-2008, 12:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by disturbed

Hey sorabrawl and azndude if you guys read the first post in this thread you would know you have to wait for wmbq to accept you. Thats the only thing I have to say to you Azndude so you don't have to read the rest of this. Your doing pretty good.

oh, im sorry, i sent him a pm but he never replied, and i read as much of the story as i could but i never bothered to go to the VERY FIRST post. sorry bout that, i was just kinda goin off of what sorabrawl did.

sorabrawl · 05-13-2008, 02:16 PM

sorry guys about that
if it's ok I think we should forget about my characters and scenes
i'm really gutted that I can't do anything