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I made a new song :)

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  1. D S

    D S Virus Creat0rgz

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    It's going to be played by my friend and his band. I won't be able to record it, to many people will be crowding.

    Here it is:
     
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    "the creatures of chaos awoken"
    dont use that
    chaos is obviously a keyword and means a lot for this song, overusing it will kill it and sound strange (so i think you should find a new word instead of chaos for that part) perhaps a word like: torment?

    besides that it seems pretty cool..lyrics okay..i suggest doing some drugs before you write your next song though.
     
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    What do you mean about doing drugs?
     
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    well doing drugs can help you write some extremely original meaningful lyrics. it seems like youre going for the rock-metal type sound? yeah, all those people do drugs..
     
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    I'm not going to do drugs, my Girlfriend will dump me.
     
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    get her to do them with you... :sick:
    or just say its for inspiration and some dude on the internet told you so.
    or maybe just the first part of that last reason..
     
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    her brother ended up in jail for doing drugs, and is still not able to see my girlfriend, so yeah, she'd never do them. Well, there is this time when she got high off white-out xD
     
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    Drugs.......its a risky move but to me its not worth it. but you do have a chance of being famous and die early....or if it is illegal JAILED FOR LIFE.

    So its a risky move but I would never do drugs =/

    [On Topic]

    Songs pretty good but it think it is short =/
     
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    sniffing white out kills your brain wayyyyyyyy more and takes wayyyyyyyy longer to get high off of than weed
    and if she wants to see her brother so bad why doesnt she just do drugs and get caught then???/
    btw its hard to get caught unless youre a dumbass..
     
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    WiiWouldLike2Play CU Guild For Life! :DDD

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    Nice lyrics.

    How'd this become some Drug thread? Lol.
    Don't do drugs, drugs are bad for you! :)
     
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    wiiwouldlike2play is right, HUGS NOT DRUGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Kiwi Drug Addicts Unite

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