This is my story I'm writing because I kind want to become and author. Ganarg the barbarian. Chapter one: A fearsome battle I slowly stepped back from the dark beast in front of me, It's teeth as sharp as a razor blade, It's claws as black as ash, It's fur as dark as night, It launched it's self at me with a fearsome slash, I only just dodged it's attack, This creature moves extremely fast, unnatural I leaped at it, trying to get at least a small slice into the beast with my spear, But it was to fast, it dodged my attack and took a swing and my chest, It hit my quest but only to get a small slice, This beast is no an ordinary creature, I went in for an attack when it jumped right at me, We were both in the air coming at each over, I couldn't stop, we were going to collide. We hit and both fell down to the ground I quickly jumped up and ran at it again, It tried to dodge but it was to late I had already speared it through it's chest. The beast now lying on the cold ground dead, I needed something to keep me warm, So I got my hunting knife out and Cut off its thick fur to use as a coat. I took the body of the dead beast to a cave and waited till morning to return to my village. I woke up early in the morning to head back to my village when there were 3 men surrounding me, I asked "What do you want" They replied "We want you dead. I smirked then jumped up with a kick to each side of me smashing two of them in the chest, They smashed there heads on the side of the cave and cracked there skulls. The third man drew his blade and started walking around me, I tried to side kick him but he grabbed my leg and spun me around, I fell to the ground, I thought to myself "This guy is tougher then the other two" He then tried to stab my stomach with a fearsome blow, I rolled out of the way just in time I through my double headed spear at him, He dodged it and it jammed into the side of the cave. The man launched at me when I ducked and kicked him in the stomach, he fell backwards and his head speared through the double headed spear that jammed into the wall. That's chapter one, how was it?