It's actually a bit LONGER than the original, oddly enough (only by a sentence or two). I'm pretty sure it just looks short because it's all crammed together.
That's fine. I'll be in town this weekend & if you guys get a chance would like to come over to play some Wii? Also could you explain what you told me in that pm better? I don't understand what caused it. I know I don't have to say this but, explain in pm please.
Got it. Almost finshed with him. I had to change a few other things cause I noticed I accidently gave him some of the stuff from someone elses Shinigami for my Bleach fic.