Poems for all

[Z3wpk]

Ahh just the thread for me. Mine are on the more serious side.

Days

I don't really know what I'm trying to do

But then I just realize I'm falling for you

I'm tired of all these protocols

Just to be with you is it all

The time ticks by with no time to wait

Having you may be more than just fate

You don't notice the unorthodox style

But once you fall I'll be there for a while

You said it's probably not a guarantee

But you don't know how much that really meant to me

We finally then went our separate ways

Untill I see you, I'll be counting the days​

I have a couple more too. Hope you enjoy

 

[ElronMac]

Sparx, I loved yours about Brawl online, at least you have been able to play online though, I have played once since I got the game the rest of the time it either just waits and waits or it loses the network. I am pretty disappointed with the online portion.

 

[Z3wpk]

Another poem

Silver Lined Dreams

Just to be with her is all that I want

But being best friends with her is just a taunt

Her in my arms is really just a dream

But it feels just as real then what it may seem

Although many dreams do come true

This one has just fell through

Because this is just a fantasy

There's not more that the eye can see

Having her could change my soul

But I guess I just can't control

She doesn't realize how much I love her

I guess that shows how close are hearts were​

 

[Sparx]

Did you make that one Z3wpk?

 

[Z3wpk]

Yupp!

 

[ElronMac]

Another poem

Silver Lined Dreams

Just to be with her is all that I want

But being best friends with her is just a taunt

Her in my arms is really just a dream

But it feels just as real then what it may seem

Although many dreams do come true

This one has just fell through

Because this is just a fantasy

There's not more that the eye can see

Having her could change my soul

But I guess I just can't control

She doesn't realize how much I love her

I guess that shows how close are hearts were​

Just ask her out already :lol:

 

[Z3wpk]

Just ask her out already :lol:

Lol it's funny though cause I show this to my friends and then they're like Ashley? (the girl I like) and I'm like nope. Since I just write in general. Of course I do write about what I dream but not anyone in particular.

 

[ElronMac]

take the time to heed your words
listen to your thoughts
or fly with the birds

dream about the things you write
see the dreams that feed your blight
spend time growing near
what is you have come to fear

paper and pen your only sword
anguish and solace your only way
dream in darkness learn to play

what you write is here to stay

here ya go boys, I wrote this on the spot in reply to Z3wpk's last post, enjoy, not my best work by far, but for spur of the moment it doesn't totally suck...

 

[Z3wpk]

Now that was pretty good nice job. My only problem is that it changes rhyming patterns pretty often so its a little all over the place but still great!

 

[ElronMac]

Now that was pretty good nice job. My only problem is that it changes rhyming patterns pretty often so its a little all over the place but still great!

yeah thats what happens when I try and do things quickly, I tend to lose the rhythm, give me a couple days to work on it and it would be much better. Personally I prefer writing without the structure of rhyming patterns, but for some reason when i do start to write it usually ends up rhyming, go figure.

 

[HyPeRsHoCk]

Wow...all I can say is wow...

 

[Z3wpk]

Wow...all I can say is wow...

Explain Hypershock, we wanna hear your opinion!

 

[ElronMac]

Wow...all I can say is wow...

yeah what the kermit fan said.....lol

we need opinions:lol:

 

[Z3wpk]

yeah thats what happens when I try and do things quickly, I tend to lose the rhythm, give me a couple days to work on it and it would be much better. Personally I prefer writing without the structure of rhyming patterns, but for some reason when i do start to write it usually ends up rhyming, go figure.

You know I recently go into the structure of rhyming cause when ever I think of things in my head they just end up trying to rhyme them selves. And dude you should take time on your writing it really does help I mean yea you could just fix it up but still. :smilewinkgrin: lol

 

[HyPeRsHoCk]

I mean wow as in this is kind of sad...making e-poems...but w/e you guys want to do you do...