Poems for all
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ElronMac
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Z3wpk said:
Oh shut up:lol: I told you it was spur of the moment, what did you expect morrison, browning or Auden, I'm a Wii fanboy for christ sake thats as good as it gets LMAO.........
Thanks for reading and writing dude, it's awesome to run across intelligent people.....
Here, something a bit more polished, just for you.
DESIRE
IT LOVES
IT FEELS
SOMETIMES IT STEALS
IT'S PAIN
IT'S SORROW
IT'S DEATH ON THE MORROW
IT'S LAUGHTER
IT'S JOY
SOMETIMES A TOY
IT'S HATE
IT'S FEAR
IT'S ALWAYS NEAR
IT'S ALL THESE THINGS
TO OUR IRE
BUT MOST OF ALL
IT'S OUR DESIRE
HyPeRsHoCk
Future Marine
You guys are making poems, correct?
No No I'm expecting gods to come down when you write because it's sooo...... godly? Lol I get it, it was spur of the moment.:lol:ElronMac said:
And that was pretty good. I like repetition like that. Short but really has a meaning to it.
I actually just whiped something up.
Having To See It
Having seen the hell he has put you through
You just don't realize he's walking all over you
You say its not that bad over and over again
But why cant it be like it was back then
I feel your pain you just don't know it yet
When you're around him it shouldn't make you sweat
He treats you like dirt and tears us apart
It takes more than a man and half of a heart
The mask he has on doesn't fool me
Behind closed doors he beats you I see
The horror it takes to walk in your shoes
With the chains you're in it's hard to choose
You're dead! You're Dead! He shouts with a knife
But he just doesn't know yet he's scarred for life
Having seen the hell he has put you through
You just don't realize he's walking all over you
You say its not that bad over and over again
But why cant it be like it was back then
I feel your pain you just don't know it yet
When you're around him it shouldn't make you sweat
He treats you like dirt and tears us apart
It takes more than a man and half of a heart
The mask he has on doesn't fool me
Behind closed doors he beats you I see
The horror it takes to walk in your shoes
With the chains you're in it's hard to choose
You're dead! You're Dead! He shouts with a knife
But he just doesn't know yet he's scarred for life
Its pretty harsh at the end but it does have a true meaning.
ElronMac
WiiChat Member
Very nice, although I really think that would make a better song, you know what I mean?? it's got rhythm for it and it is very harsh. Nice though, for spur of the moment, although i must admit I was looking for something more along the lines of Yeates or Frost, but this will do....lol
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Ha you thought wrong my friend lol. But yea my friends always say that I should make songs since I do also play guitar and stuff like that but I dunno. I've never really known what to do with my life and right now I'm in this artsy type face which I am absolutely loving.
ElronMac
WiiChat Member
Z3wpk said:
Dude, you said artsy...lol
ok that was the 13 year old fanboy in my head, don't pay him any attention. And don't worry about what you want to do with your life, it will figure itself out sooner or later I guarantee it. just stay gold, thats all that really matters
not to stray to far off topic, but who is your favorite poet? Top three for me are Jim Morrison, Auden and Elizabeth Berret Browning, I actually have one of her books that is a first edition, over a hundred years old now and I still read it...
ROB64 said:
awesome!!!
here is one of mine. i post them sometimes on my blog, random lines i feel are post worthy. most make it into songs i write or something.
in this contrast of hot and cold
i can't seem to find a middle ground
in this battle of new and old
i can't seem to gain a thing. (this isn't about what you think)
if you listen intently
you can hear the sound of honesty
and honestly, it seems hard for me
to take anything so seriously as others
perceive them to be..
i wish you could have my eyes
my life is no game
but i would be the rope
in some tug of war
where obviously i can never win
can i honestly do anything?
am i just the rope in a war game?
i opt to shake
not hit, but they don't go for it
then they would be on the same side..
i hope you hear this and forgive
cause you owe it to yourself
to let it go.
i hope to frequent this thread a lot! let me know what you think of my stuff.
ElronMac said:
i totally heart e e cummings, and also a bunch of peeps i can't remember. whose the samuel guy who wrote like proverb type things? was his name samuel? i dunno. any one who can change the world with words is ok in my book. just don't read my lines like they end in a question or something when they don't even if it makes them more "poetic"
EDIT: SAUL WILLIAMS is the man! read some of his stuff.
Skorp
WiiChat Member
Theres a ton of poets I like, Vikram Seth is a good example of my favorite type of work. Billy Collins is also really good.
ElronMac
WiiChat Member
HyPeRsHoCk said:
There is no room here for someone as simple minded as yourself.
HyPeRsHoCk
Future Marine
ElronMac said:
Oh really? Is that so?
