Poems for all

[Wii_NINJA]

The Lips

My greatest fear is behind my soul
As i stare at this powdery coal
I know shes near
I try not to fear
For i love her beauty and grace
I see her...
I have no look of fear on my face
With her velvet lips on my neck
Her teeth sink in
My eyes go blank
I'm now one of them

By: Azure Wolf

 

[ElronMac]

Oh really? Is that so?

Yes really, that is so. There is enough negativity in this world why do we need you to bring more of it into this thread? It doesn't take much thought at all to say you what you said, however had you taken a moment and really thought out a response full of constructive information be it good or bad we would have listened. We are enjoying what we write and if you don't that is fine, but say something constructive to us.

I see you are going to be a Marine, for that I thank you. My father served in Nam and I did my time as well, more power to you. Just remember though that because you carry a gun and defend us all, you needn't lose your ability to think. Here is something from one of your future brothers in arms, enjoy it or don't, but at least take the time to think about it.

VIETNAM 1968

You walk along the sidewalk here,
and see the bunkers lying near;
the sight you see is somewhat stunning,
and then you hear feet a-running;
as someone yells "INCOMING".

Some land near, some far away,
it happens anytime, night or day;
the raucous roar of rounds that burst,
always seems closer than the first;
although you pray against the worst.

Then thoughts turn to child and wife,
or someone dear, in a different life;
you're glad that they don't have to see,
the life that you live endlessly;
fighting just to keep them free.

Cpl Terry Pinkerton, 3d Mar, 68-69​

 

[gidget]

my haiku:

i love the white snow
snow calls lovely deer from woods
lovely deer and snow

i love haikus
​

 

[ElronMac]

Nice one Idjut

Haiku's are way fun aren't they:wink:

 

[gidget]

i so love haikus
while i chat online with friends
i then wait and watch

i love haikus​

 

[Wii_NINJA]

nice idjut

 

[HyPeRsHoCk]

My apologies, I'll try not to do it again.

 

[Z3wpk]

Haha Idjut you and your creative mind. Nice poems everyone, I have read them all and I may try to work on a couple tonight.

 

[ElronMac]

My apologies, I'll try not to do it again.

Thank you and thank you for taking the time to read what I wrote.

Now lets see what you can write, and I guarantee you if it sucks I will be extremely constructive with my reply:lol: And you should do the same, if you don't like it tell us why or what it is, we can't make it better if we don't know whats wrong, can't guarantee we will actually change but we will listen:lol:

 

[Z3wpk]

Thank you and thank you for taking the time to read what I wrote.

Now lets see what you can write, and I guarantee you if it sucks I will be extremely constructive with my reply:lol: And you should do the same, if you don't like it tell us why or what it is, we can't make it better if we don't know whats wrong, can't guarantee we will actually change but we will listen:lol:

Exactly how I feel!! lol

Anyway, OHHH :yikes: you know what we should do?! We should have a poem theme thing. Like tonight we should pick a topic to write a poem about.

 

[ElronMac]

Good idea, who gets to pick the topic?

 

[Z3wpk]

OHHH it was my idea soooooo I pick yay!!! lol

Hmm I'll go with something simple and pick..... umm Music!

Get writing!!

(Btw this is optional)

 

[Skorp]

On the music theme.

Dancing in Place

The lyrics resound, poetic, profound
But the music is magic, my feet leave the ground

Ears blessed with sight
Soul taking flight
Dancing tonight
There’s music within

What notes are these that squeeze melodies
From head to toe that no limb disagrees?

Hands blessed with grace,
Thoughts lost in space,
I’m dancing in place,
When the music begins.

~Skorp

 

[ElronMac]

My entries, so I wrote two, sometimes that happens. let me know what you think
#1

listen to the wind blow
here the chimes sing
their single notes ring
without a common sound

listen to natures call
see the creatures sight
their feeble endless blight
without a common sound

listen to people cry
feel their painless strife
fumble thru their life
without a common sound

hear the wind blow
as nature makes it call
listen to people enthralled
as music takes flight

#2

the minstrel played a simple tune
upon a broken lute
his broken heart in tune
with all the world it hears
his simple tears dripping
wet across the reed,
his battered fingers tense
his body drooped upon his knees

the minstrel played a simple tune
a sweet melody
his smile from within
his sounds caressing
his soul commanding sin
without worry or doubt
his muted cries a brick
for the love of his sound
for his music

 

[Sparx]

Here's another one by me on Photshop CS3

Photoshop CS3..
Oh why must you confuse me?
The buttons are here and there,
New options everywhere,
And I got so frustrated, I really didn't care.
Your speed is crap,
I would rather sit on the Devil's Lap...
Than you use you....Adobe PhotoShop CS3!

*Sniffle*Sniffle*Tear*Sniffle*Tear*