Close said:9/10 Ava.
6.5/10 Sig, nothin goin on.
Alright then:
9/10 Ava.
6.5/10 Sig - Bad render blending, Horrible bg, No light source, no originality, no action at all just a render, bad text, bad render placement. Easy; Open document, add grunge brushes, add color balance, add in render, add text. Good enough critique ? If you need more, ask me.