Rap?

[Cringey]

Any lyrically adept, swagfags, poem writers, rappers, rhyme sayers in here?

Post some bars or lyrics for your song for feedback/criticism. No flaming.

Battle other people in a battle rap if you want, too.

 

[Cringey]

Rough edges and perfect, a bad time mixed with blessings,
Since she's the only girl, she's the only contestent,
i'm gonna test the waters, I hope my songs leave an impression
I got gunpowder in my chest, and her loves a Smith n Wesson
everybody makes mistakes, but everybody don't learn the lesson
but since God gives me strength, you'll rarely catch me stressin
Leave the memories in tact, go for answers not the questions
and don't dwell on the past, be obsessed with progression

I'm not sure why I decided to do this lol

 

[Splash_King]

I've respect for the linguistically gifted, so I'd say this belongs in the Lounge moreso than White Noise. Speakin' of, ya've some decent verses yourself.

I could'a swore Bodine made a rap thread in days long passed, but I can't find it... ... ...

inb4 assasin trolls

 

[Cringey]

I appreciate the compliment thank you. Is there a way to move this thread?

 

[DBloke]

Modern rap = crap

 

[Splash_King]

... Bloke enters threads with the grace of a drunken Snorlax. AKA the bluntness of a Splash_King.

Is there a way to move this thread?

already did lawl

 

[WiiAssasin]

I would've done so earlier if I wasn't so tired. But yeah, lyrically adept and rap should never be lumped together. Or... that other word TC used.

 

[Splash_King]

The law of 100% statistics spits on your inadequate opinion.

inb4 assasin trolls

yep

 

[Cringey]

Modern rap = crap

Oh good to know, thanks

 

[Splash_King]

not sure if berating sarcasm, or sarcastic agreement

 

[DBloke]

Last recent rap song I heard it was some guy complaining about having too much stuff, that should never be a problem

 

[hybrid -x1]

Rap is garbage.
The End

 

[Splash_King]

 

[hybrid -x1]

^
I'm not a "man" I'm a muk! "Got it Memorized?" ^_~

 

[Splash_King]

Your taste in music is toxic.