Poems for all

[Wii_NINJA]

ok this poem is called trying to find an answer


what is death is what i ask
i take a look along the past
for an answer in the stars
so i may heal these dreadful scars
but as i look i realize
there is no truth but only lies
oh where are we in this world today?
i do not know, i can not say
i'll take a look in my heart once more
and find that the answer is behind the door...

Azure Wolf

 

[Skorp]

^ I like the last two lines.

That was my first poem EVER! How was it?

I'm not gonna lie, it made me a little hungry

 

[Wii_NINJA]

*turns into a wolf and starts to chase her tail*

 

[Fox]

The night is all tremors
an unborn lamb stirs
I smell Fox in the air
a light beyond understanding
...! Stay close sheppard

 

[Wii_NINJA]

nice one tails

 

[pro gamer]

^ I like the last two lines.



I'm not gonna lie, it made me a little hungry

Go have a sandwich then.:lol:

 

[Sparx]

Mine was better >.<

 

[pro gamer]

Sparx why do you have to be so mean.

 

[Sparx]

Heres another one:

My current sig is the best
The best in the west
All thanks to Gikoku
Who gave me a Shikoku
Gikoku is indeed awesome.
More awesome than a possum.
He is so great
because he doesnt make me wait
There is no better artist than him.
God Bless Gikoku, to who I would give a limb.

WHAT NOW PRO GAMER ! WHAT NOW OH YOU GOT SERVED!

 

[Skorp]

*Takes a bite of his sandwich.* *grins at Sparx*

 

[gidget]

:scared:

 

[ElronMac]

Thanks to all for reading what I write it is appreciated. Skorp a special thanks to you and a bit of advice, think more about what you are trying to say, and then feel it and write. I can see in what you write that you are trying to say is on the verge of your feelings so don't give up. It doesn't ever have to be clouded and ambiguous or sometimes it does, and sometimes it can be be point blank and straight forward, it always just depends on what you are trying to express to those who read your work. Not to be a pain in the ass school teacher but here are two examples of exactly that, now Skorp, you tell me what I am trying to say in each.

CRYSTAL CLEAR

RED AND WHITE
CRYSTAL CLEAR
THE FRUIT OF LIFE
THE END IS NEAR
OF FOLLY WE LEARN
DRINK THE RED
BITE THE WHITE
SAVE THE EMPTY
CRYSTAL CLEAR


WHAT YOU'VE CREATED


IT'S TOO BAD YOU DON'T REALIZE WHAT YOU'VE CREATED
YOU AND YOUR HARSH WORDS
YOUR VIOLENT SPOON AND WICKED EYES
YOU LOCKED IT OUT
IT TRIED TO CRAWL BACK
YOU BRUSHED IT OFF WITH AN EMOTIONLESS SNEER
YOU KICKED IT
NOW LOOK WHAT IT CAN'T DO
IT WILL WALK ALONE
IT WILL DIE ALONE
IT'S TOO BAD YOU DON'T REALIZE WHAT YOU'VE CREATED
BCAUSE IT'S YOU
​

Enjoy :wink:

 

[Fox]

Very nice, ElronMac.

nice one tails

Please, call me Fox, and thank you. ^_^

 

[Deanis]

Roses are red, violets are violet.
Stuff romantics, lets start a riot.

 

[tank]

Roses are #FF0000
Violets are #0000FF
All my base
are belong to you



for my nerd <3