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  1. vashivihan

    vashivihan Let There Be Rock

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    hey people, i had to write this essay on socialism and how did the industrial revolution contributed to it. i just wanted tour feedback on it. and please dont plagarize. its kinds long.

    thx
     
  2. Floydd

    Floydd 雨... 雨..

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    Just a little. But yeah, it's alright.. Wouldn't be hesitant in handing it in.
     
  3. vashivihan

    vashivihan Let There Be Rock

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    yeah its supposed to be that long.
     
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    Abes16 WiiChat legend

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    pretty good how much words is it
     
  5. K LoLo

    K LoLo Wii Addict

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    I noticed you didnt have any citations for your quotes, are you supposed to?
     
  6. vashivihan

    vashivihan Let There Be Rock

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    no, citations are supposed to be at the end. in the Bibliography.
    no idea, but i would guess about 5000.
     
  7. K LoLo

    K LoLo Wii Addict

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    What kind of paper is this, like what writing format are you using? MLA or something else?
     
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    Gaz Poker Face :D

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    No way is that 5000 words, more like 1500.
     
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    [DT] Gearhead Surf Coder

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    Outstanding guess - 1508 :)

    [no I didn't manually count]
     
  10. vashivihan

    vashivihan Let There Be Rock

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    well i dont know, i didnt use the word count

    yeah its MLA
     
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    TacosTacos WiiChat.com>Match.com

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    How old are you? What class is this for?
     
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    DRMARIO Controversial.

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    Hahahaha, 5000 :p
    I was about to comment and say how wrong that was, but I was beaten to it :p

    It's a good essay! I'm sure you'll be graded well.
     
  13. vashivihan

    vashivihan Let There Be Rock

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    17. this is for social studies.
     
  14. vashivihan

    vashivihan Let There Be Rock

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    i just guessed from top of my head.
     
  15. Marioman

    Marioman Locke likes oranges

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    Haha..the topic reminds me of Billy Madison at the end of the movie where he has to explain something about the Industrial Revolution and he goes in a speech about the Little Train that could...Everyone clapped but what was funny was that the Judge said "Everyone is now dumber becuase of that speech, you recieve no points, and may god have mercy on your soul" haha...

    Yea I like to ramble, anyway nice paper
     

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